| Reviews for Withhold |
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rattle-the-stars chapter 33 . 6/19 Hey! I know you have a life outside of writing fanfiction, and I also know that it's been a long time since you updated. But if you are feeling up to it, please update! I really love this story, and I don't want to see it abandoned like so many others. You are such a great writer and have a really great plot going on. You might never see this, but please give your loyal readers another chapter, at least :( Much love 333 |
Guest chapter 33 . 5/27 I loved the story, but I can’t believe you stopped writing it. |
Big Fan chapter 33 . 5/20 This is a good story. Please continue. Wizard Jim is so cool! Will not Enrique come back for Claire's brother? Will Jim's Uncle make any more effort to help him? Will Strickler not tie himself to Barbra? Will we see Jim's Bio dad? I still forsee a lot of gnome removal in Jim's future? It would be cool if they took a trip on the gyroscope. Do you think will pay more attention to Trollish history this time around? He could use that time stopper things from inside that giant volacano guy. |
17 chapter 33 . 5/19 Also wizards is supposed to release august 2020! I cant wait to see my fav characters again...even though draal is dead :'( |
17 chapter 33 . 5/19 Author please oh please update soon! I looooovveee this story! Its hard to find good stories. Ones that have a good plot and grammar. I recently started rewatching the series. Still amazing! I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS! |
Az The Dragon chapter 33 . 3/22 Ok, this... wow. Just... wow! I am utterly impressed by the quality of this fic and its plot. I've been glued to this for about two days, probably three, and my eyes are screaming for mercy. I was surprised to see the kind of twists that Jim brought by just being there. It shows how much changing something (saving Kanjigar) could result in such different events. Ok, not really. I mean, some of the events are the same (the bridge of Killahead, the Fetch, Enrique being chosen), but at the same time they are so different..! This is why I love the Time Travel Trope. All these what ifs and trying to do better the second time. Now to see what will happen next. If this is all an illusion Jim is living through (like the original episode seems to be), if he's a seer just like Vendel thinks, or if it's REALLY time travel. Or, you know, if Jim will eventually get his hands on Daylight without Kanjigar actually dying. It's surprising how much I came to care about this troll when there was so little of him in the show. You did well. (though I still have issues coming to term with Jim not having the amulet, I am utterly intrigued by a possible wizard!Jim) The only problem I have with this story is the lack of moments like Bular texting Strickler and the Monster Parade. Those were gem moments that I will ALWAYS treasure. I mean, Bular crouching down into a dark corner and trying to compose a text on a too small phone, squinting his eyes at the screen and perhaps looking very unsure? Or a group of goblins acting more like an unruly band of bikers? Precious! Thank you for writing this story. I love it. |
dragonluna6295 chapter 33 . 3/7 Hello, I love your story so much and since it’s been a while since you posted a chapter I was wondering when you think the next chapter will come out? Sry if I’m being rude for asking |
dragonluna6295 chapter 33 . 12/10/2019 They say that Wizards might come out in early 2020 now for some reason but it’s not official |
Bookeater-otaku chapter 33 . 12/8/2019 Sadly we won't get wizards this year. It would have been a great source of lore for this story too if you managed to fuse both. Was that a 3below reference I spotted with the FBI agent? And now those above need to survive Bular and the changeling. In a sense, they should have stayed down there for their safety. |
Lynse chapter 33 . 12/8/2019 Thanks for the update! I love all your world-building (along with...everything else). |
shellycat chapter 33 . 12/8/2019 Hmmms...I have a feeling Kanjingar will die soon...but maybe he finds out Jim was next after him Just a feeling |
BooksAreMedicine chapter 33 . 12/7/2019 I did like seeing Strickler stand up for what he believes in. That blood magic book sounds like it could get both dangerous and evil really easily...might be another test Jim will have to face. Is it okay to use blood/dark magic to free himself? Or should he avoid that type of magic altogether to avoid corruption of his magic or soul or both? Jim not getting a change/not having time to learn magic in one single year of training does fit...especially since his year was more eventful than most Trollhunters of the past. I do hope that part-troll Jim happens at some point in your story. It was kind of a cool bit that the show didn't really get to explore all that well. |
Guest chapter 32 . 12/2/2019 I love this story! Please update soon! |
Lynse chapter 27 . 11/24/2019 I normally don't reread stuff so quickly, but I went back and watched Trollhunters again up to the point where this fic takes place and am rereading this to catch everything I've missed. I think this is one of my favourite chapters, for the match between Jim and Draal. And that sense of the secret being so *close*. (I'm a sucker for a main character having a secret they're trying to keep from other people.) It's very fun. So thank you again. |
Lynse chapter 32 . 11/15/2019 Great job with this chapter! Thanks for the update. |