Reviews for The Incident at Salem Center General
Nostromo-8013 chapter 1 . 5/29/2018
A new story from you and I've been oblivious!
Slightly...very worried about what's in store. Heh.
Good to see you're still around!
shadow chapter 8 . 2/5/2018
i love how relatable scott is thinking its tattling also justice is soo satisfying. is there a bigger picture? please continue?
shadow chapter 7 . 2/5/2018
ahhh asdjhgdakh i love it i dont even know why its so good
shadow chapter 6 . 2/5/2018
how about "i'll make the world safe and sound for you" lol or is there a character limit for the chapter titles? also i loooove your realistic dialogue so much and your description is perfect without going overboard
shadow chapter 5 . 2/5/2018
awww scott is so adorable i love him hes so innocent. also really good job setting up suspense but not overdoing it!
shadow chapter 4 . 2/5/2018
excuse me have you been listening to hamilton ahhh i love the creative chapter titles so much! and i love how you don't really idealize the caharcters, you talk about them as if theyre real people and i love it
shadow chapter 3 . 2/5/2018
i love this interaction! it's really well constructed, and i can imagine it actually happening between people my age (except for the more mutant-y parts, but you know what i mean)
shadow chapter 2 . 2/5/2018
short but really good! i like these bite sized chapters as long as you update frequently :) i dont have a very long attention span haha. also i really love your portrayal of charles its really good
shadow chapter 1 . 2/5/2018
this is super amazing! as always your writing style is extremely satisfying to me, although i don't know why. also, is this part of the larger series you were writing? the characterizations seem similar, so i was just curious
savedbygrace94 chapter 8 . 2/4/2018
Short and sweet! Er, not so sweet, but definitely interesting! Thanks for a great few chapters :) maybe you'll write another x-men story soon! (I sure hope so, I always enjoy your work!)
savedbygrace94 chapter 5 . 1/30/2018
Creepy... something is definitely up in this hospital...
feathered moon wings chapter 4 . 1/29/2018
I can't help but feel that your last 8 words were specifically for Charles, but that's just me hehe.
Heeeey! It's nice to see you again, though now that I'm reading you I'm beginning to wonder if I ever finished your last story.
Anywho, been reading the chapters since they came out, but this one also made me think that it would be VERY uncomfortable for Charles. THAT many people with more than half being emotionally and mentally distressed must be a strain.
So funny for the person who was super aroused XD don't be such a prude Charles, it happens everywhere. But, alas, things are starting to become interesting, can't wait :)
savedbygrace94 chapter 3 . 1/28/2018
This sounds super interesting! Glad to see you returned to X-men, I can't wait to see what you've got cooked up this time!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/26/2018
Wow, I really enjoyed your former X-Men fics and I'm happy that you're writing another X-Men fic! Interested to see how this story will unfold:D