Are you going to finish the story it’s really good

Continue, please, I want to read more

(laughs) poor Jessica, Bella taking it in a good mood is the best

Just hoping they stay together forever

Oh, more and more interesting... I can only think how Edward would react to this

I loved it so much, that now I'm going to look for more Paul and Bella fanfics

Paul is adorable when he's all grumpy about the imprint

I think it's really cruel to stop like that! Hope to read you soon!

it's a shame that you don't have more comments this story is awesome
Paul’s personality is complex and well defined it’s great to see a story where he accepts the imprint right away without changing who he is or trying to deny Bella. You stay true to Bella's character while improving it a bit I find in your story she doesn't make me want to slap her like in the book! You leave us on this cliffhanger at the end, is Jared going to regain his senses before going too far, how is Paul going, how is Bella going to react to this violence, is she going to freak out and Kim is she going keep the baby? Come on you can't leave me without answers
I want to see Paul and Bella's relationship evolve, I know that thanks to him Bella can open up and flourish he can help her find her strengh and she can help him channel his thirst for brutality without taking it away

Dun dun! Oof. Poor Jared. And Bella? Bet she's fine with all of that lol - good with weird right?

Adorable.

They really are so cute. Oof I love them

I love this Paul a lot, and your take on imprinting. And I loveeee the slow burn. I do have a question though (and maybe I just missed it in previous chapters?) - how old is Paul?

Please please please continue this story! I’m addicted!

Well this was excellent.

I don't really get Paul and Jared's fixation on fighting the way they do, but I suppose I don't really need to.

I do like your Paul, though. Jared's mom adopting him isn't something I've seen before.

Thanks for writing this, I really enjoyed it.