well after 22 chapters i still don't understand why the North has not totally break away for the 7 kingdoms. They do not interact with the south at all (somethink that i love) but since their is no more dragon why the hell should they stay under the rules of anyone in the south (even if in name only) they could have simply said "good bye, see you"...

We all love the Queen of Thorns Olenna Redwyne and her completely honest opinions about everything. I would love to see just a small paragraph of her opinion on house Gardner, her husband Mason and her children.

One of the best stories I have ever read. I am such a sucker for world building stories, at least ones done right, and this is one of them. Once I started reading I couldn't stop.

I hope you will update this story one day and maybe another day make a new story just like this one.

I so enjoy world building stories and this is one of the best ones I've ever seen and it deserves so much more attention. The lack of 1st person action and dialog is a bit off putting but like I said before, the world building is great, realistic and logical. Great story I hope you update or make a new one in this style.

This is an excellent alternate history of Westeros, one that was lots of fun to read. Is there any chance that you will be continuing it?

Please don't stop

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a nice chapter keep up the great work

The Starks, Gardners, and Martells chose the best option, stay out of it.

I love this, though honestly I was a bit put off by the storyline sort of narrative but I've come to like it. Say what you want about how Tyrion is a redeemable lion but I just love seeing the Lannisters dooming themselves

I pray that you let Olenna Tyrell live because technically she's not a Tyrell she's a Redwyne.

yeah the fight begins great job keep up the great work

I like how you set it from a historian’s perspective for most of the early chapters. It made for Todd world building in my opinion

more please

An interesting story, with a highly creative plot. Only marred by its mostly history book style narrative, although it isn't too tedious, having a decent pace to the storyline.