While this story was good Lemon-wise, I was left wanting to shoot Jake and his mother for being assholes to his father and his baby sister.

Love it. So hott I had to reread it.

Didn't Jake long have one or two female characters in the show that were around his age add them as well

five stars. two enthusiastic thumbs up...wait...make that one.

well that was unexpected.

Another great chapter and great way to tie things up for the ending of this story with a orgy. :)

Accidentally missed the updates on my end. But still quite enjoyed this chapter and how Haley trying to dominate and take her place as the top bitch, ended up backfiring with Trudy and Susan putting her in her place instead. :)

been a while...good stuff as always

I like thé way You bad Penny punished.

For more chapters could we see Rosa or the Oracle Twins.

Brilliant and wonderful chapter, thank you for letting me know it was up. :) I really think you wrote Haley and Jake perfectly, and just really loved how they played off of each other as well.

The sex was of course awesome and just really loved the ending with their dad getting cuckolded one last time and losing everything.

awesome

Love the story. Hoping for a 4th chapter. I am assuming the little sister will be added?

Love it hope you keep updating

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