| Reviews for Core Memory |
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The Ethereal Wolf chapter 5 . 9/28/2018 No complaints with the story so far, it's well written and you put enough description in to put an image in my head without overdoing it. However, I'll wait to do a more comprehensive review until a few more chapters in so I have more details to work with. I don't like to make complete judgements without a bigger picture. I'm eager to see where you take this. |
Zo chapter 4 . 3/15/2018 Are you still writing this? Please continue |
AppleBagelUnicron chapter 4 . 3/14/2018 Dang, now I feel stupid. I commented thinking that GLaDOS gave Wheatley a girls body. I’m sorry, I must have confused you with my other comment. |
AppleBagelUnicron chapter 1 . 3/3/2018 Only one complaint. Wow, that was quick. In other stories it usually takes Wheatley about 2-4 years to get back to earth. In this story it takes about a few hours. GLaDOS definitely wastes no time (lol). Other than that I have no complains, but I do have a question. GLaDOS said that if Wheatley ran away she would make him self destruct. Did he run away and meet his fate or are you going to continue the story? |
JustaRandomNerd chapter 3 . 2/17/2018 'Wheatley going through wheat.' Ah the irony. |
Quantum27 chapter 3 . 2/18/2018 I loved your descriptions of 'the booting up'! Everything was very in character! Nice! |
Quantum27 chapter 2 . 2/14/2018 Oh...this is really good! Very nice job! |