Always good to see a torch wick fanfic I still hate that they made such an interesting character and made him die instantly to a bird

How much of the story is changed?

Can you describe how ion looks, like hair color, skin color and all that jazz

I tip my hat to the SCP references in about the middle of the chapter

Hey, it's me from Google. (Man its been a long time.) I was going to review this when I read all the chapters, but I derailed a bit. So I thought it's only far to just review here.

So far, it's pretty good. I never do read much stories with Ol' Torchwock as the focus. Not sure how accurate it is for Roman to being this caring for a stray, but then again, someone like Cinder with no trait other than evil wouldn't suit this story. So it's fine on my book.

I'd like to see more of this caring Torchwick, while showing his maniacal side from the show a few times. Also him and Neo. I thought they're aren't like that, but oh well. Something like that wouldn't ruin the story anyways.

Best of luck with everything,Sorry for your problems. So Will you do a rewrite or Just changing chapters?

Masterful character writing

Not bad at work.

Omg my feels. It hurts. Also it's funny because I actually know a doctor named House it'll. He just treated my sister's broken arm recently. Good chapter can't wait for more.

I get a game of thrones story vibe from the narration at the end I like it

Was the Doctor being called House a reference to House M.D.? Because it seems like it.

This was a solid chapter,
Keep up the astounding work.

Pretty cool

Epic chapter, i can't wait to see canon again. Good work.

This was a great chapter,
Please keep up the awesome work.