Are you still alive? Is this story dead for good? Please let me know. :(

super

Wow! Cute story and wonderful development of the plot! You’ve taken a tired trope and breathed new life into it and so masterfully written too!

Nope just can’t do it.

It’s kinda irritating too read about how messed up he is getting about everything being different. He walked thru the veil knowing he was going to a different world. He even acknowledges he is in a different world. So why is he freaking out about stuff being different, is he a moron. I swear to god if the next chapters are him going to meet this worlds Hermione and Ron I’m done. This is a Buffy crossover, we should be getting to that not dragging on about a world he already left

any updates?

That was very interesting but cliffhanger! Cliffhangers are so sad. Very much hoping you can update soon!

Well. This might have been the most inappropriate time to come across this story. But social distancing means even more time to read. Definitely an interesting start.

The dialogue is way too blocky and doesn't flow right

shit

you killed this story when you have him got a doppelgeger juste to have a weakness , it is a pity because this started well

so good, i hope the excessive use of magic doesnt lead her down the willow path :) i cant wait to read more :)

Love this, please keep writing it.

I don’t give a shit about side characters there wasn’t a need for her and perspective yet

next chap? soon i hope