And a horrible ending (in a good way) that leaves me AAA I WANT TO SEE DAY FIVE!

This is quite an interesting story. And honestly a quite plausible one, too. Good job! I can't wait for it to continue! Or, well...conclude.

Sorry again about what I said at first.

Wow, they really need that dense piece of shit, huh?

"Bizzare...Far too bizzare..." IS THAT A MOTHERFUCKING JOJO REFERENCE! (jk)

This isn't a big room. I could hear everything. EVERYONE ALWAYS FORGETS THAT SO GOOD ON YOU TO REMEMBER THAT FACT LOL

fuck caps lock is raping me

That's exactly what Sayori said. So smart, she was.

Ooooh boy more subliminal messages:

He is dead. Stay out.

Wow. REAL SHIT.

Stahp don t enter the house reeeee

Fuccc okay I'm worried about how this goes down ngl.

HoLY fUCK a cORpsE

And look who it is again. Hey Sayori, long time no fuccing see.

"I almost had hope." Ouch.

They're kinda just assuming Yuri ditched on them, but she never actually said that and there is no proof she is.

The gilded house is a lie. Hmm.

Sayori scares me.

Don't tell her to not go to the house, BecAUse ThEN SHe's GoiNg tO!

I really like this!

The rich descriptions, the hidden messages in the bold words that Monika misses.

Is this fanfiction set after the "true ending" were Sayori became president and gained knowledge of everything only to shrink in fear?

I can't help but think that Monika over sells "real" life, I mean Real life for us is just murders, shootings, rape, violence, undank memes, all the while WE don't know if we live in a simulation or if there is a God..

So in a sense, we may be a game, and DDLC is like those games that appear in games that you play...

Heh...

My point is, you did good!

Any yo-yo, I wonder if the ending will include something about the third eye? Or Project Libitina?

Because I got all curious after I saw the Game Theory about it..

Either way, I love this fanfiction!

Thank you, real person, for making this! I promise that I will one day make you happy because I am THE SUPERSTAR SAGA!

Started in January and only has 3 chapters? Ha. Wow. Okay then...didn't even know this existed until now. I have 14 chapters in less the time it took you to get 3. What is this, World Beyond The Screen? Lmfao.

It’s so refreshing to see a return to the psychological horror that was present in Doki Doki Literature Club. This piece has done, from the start, and excellent job of building suspense and tension in a similar chord to the visual novel. The subtle symbolism, foreshadowing and choice diction all do a fantastic job of creating an experience like the source that we all love.
You as an author deserve to be commended for your superb ability. I would like you to know that I will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. This little project of yours has quickly become one of my favorite new additions to the site.

-Oz-

This is pretty good! Really can't wait for more.

The gilded house is a lie? What does that even mean? x Well, anyways, that was intense. I've been getting chills down my spine from the very beginning, and I'm liking it! The pacing, as always, was great! Let's see, I've had my suspicions on Sayori from the beginning, and I see it was an accurate assumption. The way you captured Act 4 Sayori was on point. The manipulative Sayori you placed in your story was very well written.

Keep up the good work!

Jeez! That was intense! I can really feel a build-up with these last two chapters that something majorly freaky is about to happen. But seriously, this is amazing so far! Really, really looking forward to more!

I don't trust sayori. Not one fucking bit.

You are really good at building uneasy tension, of something just not being right, I really hope this'll be a good psychological horror story, there aren't that many and it would be a fucking fresh breath of air from all the now way too common and cliche "Save everyone" stories.

Wow. This is a great start to this story so far. I'm guessing that this takes place after the events of the game and is in a "New Game?" Assuming that MC comes in sometime soon or later I would guess so. It's kinda refreshing to see Monica not totally obsessed with something. Can't wait for you to continue.

Wait what? Why are there no reviews for this beautiful piece of art? WHY!? Well, since there's no reviews, let me take the initiative.

It's great. Hands down, I have nothing else to say but that. The flow of the story was gorgeous. The poems you gave them really captured their personality. Their argument is so realistic I could even see it happening in the real game.

Keep it up!