Dang it, please continue it! ;w;

wow
this is really good

No! Conner!
Conner Murphy, I know it’s hard, but just come out to your parents. I don’t like them as people either, but keeping it a secret hurts you more than anyone else.
Oof. This chapter hurt me. Great writing, you left out details on Conner’s attempt but I can see why.
Can’t wait for more! Bye for now!
P.S: I have a major crush on a girl I’m in theater with. I just figured out she’s pan. *excitement overload* that means I have a chance! Wish me luck!

Hi! I like it so far! Here are some random thoughts I had while reading through everything.
1- I eat cereal dry too! :)
2- Conner liking poetry is beautiful we can write depressing free form poems together... oh wait, he’s a fictional character. Silly me. Forever alone.
3- oof, being closeted sucks. The pressure of having a secret that important to who you are does NOT help mental health.
Can’t wait for more! Bye for now!

I really liked it. I think you’re doing a good job getting Connor right. And I feel like Evan was really in character too. Keep up the amazing work.

I like it!

Sooooo good! Connor was actually super IC.

Any more of this? Please?

This is so cute! I love it!

Oh man! This is great! Please update!

"That was the whole point of going. Getting away from everyone." Your writing style is very pleasing to read, nice and fluent and makes me just wanna give Connor a huge-ass hug! Please keep going, I'm really interested in seeing how Evan reacts to this new "friend" and what kind of chemistry you can cook up between 'em! Fabulous job

Cool! You asked for requests sooo, I really like Connor comforting Evan for some reason, like Evan stuttering and feeling insecure or something and Connor reassuring him SL if you want to write that that'd be nice.

Also I get the getting Connor in character part being difficult, he is a difficult boy and we barely got to see him in the musical. Maybe reading how other people write him will help? Sorry I've never written DEH fanfiction.

Anyways I like where this is going so far, good job, I wish you luck on your journey as a writer.

Have a good day!