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Told you I would have my review for this story up before the end of the week, didn't I?

Well let's get started!

First of all, I have to say this was ASTRONOMICALLY better than the Actual PP3 which is kinda sad when fans write better stories than the actual writers XD Oh well, the story's still better lovestory than Twilight! XP

Okay first of all, I LOVE how you incorporated stuff from the movie bloopers like the scene with Amy and the dogs XD

I also love how during the scene where Amy saves everyone, everyone got a chance to kick ass! Nothing like having a scene where EVERYONE contributes, amirite? 3

And I also love how FREAKING JESSICA AND ASHLEY got a chance to sign since they NEVER get a chance to shine in the actual three canon movies and it was nice how they were actually considered a part of the group rather than just the random tagalongs XD Like I'm all for jokes but after a while, the joke gets kind of repetitive.

I am ALSO a huge fan of the Bemily moments in the fic such as Beca reassuring Emily that they were impressed and proud of her progress even if they felt a bit...outdone by the current Bellas (What does CR's line about "they look like they was breastfed" even mean!? XD) as well as them singing in Beca's final "Freedom" song. Along with the other Bellas.

And speaking of that, I also FANGIRLED when you had the compilation of all of Beca and Chloe's important memories shown during the last bits of Beca's song since I LOVE whenever that happens in either TV shows, movies, anime and etc. TBH, it kinda reminded me when Sasuke saw all of Naruto's important memories after their final fight XP

And lastly, BECHLOE IS FREAKING CANON since NO ONE really liked Chloe with Chicago XD Loved the actor as Liam in 90210 though!

And I found it AWESOME you brought Denise back for PP3 because I honestly...forgot about her XD Terrible I know but whatever happened to Denise? Did everyone forget about her? The world will never know I guess...

But my FAVORITE part of this fic? It helped to emphasize the FAMILY BOND that PP1 and PP2 showed between these women that PP3 sadly lacked. Honestly? They were more like seasonal coworkers in PP3 TBH...

Now while those were the things I LOVED, there were literally only one handful of things, I found kinda...fishy XD

I feel like you kinda made Amy...more mean than she already was in PP3. Like downplaying Emily's achievements and calling her a stupid child along with treating her like one as well as egging on Aubrey to kick her ass when they had their argument back in Chapter...12 I think I found to be a bit too mean.

And not only that I found it kind of weird how Emily was kinda being treated as an outcast by everyone? It's kind of weird since her character arc in PP2 was being accepted by the Bellas which she got WELL before the end of the movie, they pretty much accepted her after her audition when they all cheered and celebrated that she would be joining them but by PP3, it seems the Bellas still saw her as that awkward kid from all those years ago? Which is kinda weird since she led her Bellas through several championships so it's kinda weird that the Bellas treat her like a baby. Then again since I'm the youngest and shortest of my friendship group I'm treated like the baby so I guess it's the same with them although it's more of a loving rather than a judgemental way?

And I also wasn't a big fan of how Aubrey sort of reverted back to her PP1 self but that's just a minor nitpick.

Though DESPITE THOSE THREE THINGS I LOVED your story and will DEFINITELY read it again! ESPECIALLY since I have a LOT more free time with all the CoronaVirus shit that's going on with my classes for the rest of the semester being moved online so...yeah hehe _

And I see you have a new story out and I'll DEFINITELY review that!

And I can even review some of your other stories on top of that I haven't reviewed yet!

Thank you for the awesome story and ONTO THE NEXT ONE! _

Love this so far. I hope you're going to be using a lot more of Jessica And Ashley...

Nice

Nice bz

Do a collab again! I’ll read whatever you guys write together

OMG that’s a much better ending than the real movieeee :’) thanks a lot you guys, for making this amazing, fantastic story.

Love it love it love it love it!

LOVING THIS STORY SO MUCH! Also, you guys are right, the movie would be sooooo much better if you guys wrote it :’)

Thank you for this... It made up for a lot the studio could've/should've done

loved the story

I thought that the kiss should be here yet it should’ve been at the end but that’s ok I guess

Amazing. Great. I'm just listing a list of praises if I continied. Thanks for creating a very satisfying version of the movie. It makes me happy and heart ache at what could have been in the actual movie. Really great job!

Good

Absolute love for this story! Thanks for making how pp3 should be!

oh my friggin god. This is... beyond words. Amazing. Beautiful... Chapter 24 had me crying so much, it was so wonderfully written. This has been one amazing journey...and is how the movie truly went. Bow down to you. Thanks heaps for sharing