This was really good I do hope you continue with this story. I actually like this pairing as taboo as it is.

Realistic huh I don't see that is very realistic you trying to be dramatic and antsy I see you more of a lame fanfiction writer attempting to do it not actually complete the task I can think a 6 or 7 better ways you can make it realistic but you talking about anime fiction the trying to bring realism to ain't happening but nice attempt anyways good luck on your future fanfiction

I was suspicious of Hinata's strange behaviour at first but now im even more intrigued because it clearly has something to do with Sasuke, especially since he is in her nightmare. please update

I wish you would continue this fiction. I love how you put the hard part of liking a married man for Sarada herself and how you write NaruHina’s relationship. It’s an emotional and mature fic. The kind of story happens in real life and i like how you choose to write this story not in the easy way.

ok

Ahaha interesting!

Sarada is right she isn't a scum but a slut and Naruto is a pedo.

Awesome fic. Please do continue.

R u kidding !
It's been over 2 months !

Wow so much drama but good drama cant wait the day sakura or hinata will find out

Come on! There is more to see and it's been way over a month!

Update!

Hey! This has a potential to be a reaaaally good story! Keep up the good work!

Loving this. Loving what you're doing with Sarada. So conflicted. Literally fighting her self. Doing what's right vs doing what's selfish. The tension in each scene is so palpable.

Yea I'm in all the way now. I love odd pairings when the writer makes it work with in the context of the universe of the show/anime. Usually writers are too lazy and choose a convenient plot device like Hinata cheating on him or she dies or the worst, she let's him have a harem. This is a mature psychological story with an immense amount of thought going in to the characterizations.

So I sure hope you're still hungry to continue because I can't wait to read. It's been awhile since I've been so excited for a fic.

I like it so far. Unlike the other stories in this pairing, this one seems to take the relationship hurdles seriously. You don't just dismiss the fact that he's married with 2 kids and how monumental and obstacle that is to overcome. So I'm in. I want to see what you have in store.

Whts the delay ?