Reviews for Red Charade-Mylisssa |
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kmfroggi chapter 1 . 2/11/2018 This was fun, and kinda crazy! Thanks for writing and sharing |
majose chapter 1 . 2/2/2018 So cute |
TrulyOutrageous chapter 1 . 1/31/2018 Great story but I think Bella needs new friends. |
DaphneRene chapter 1 . 1/30/2018 Thank you for writing and sharing your story, characters, and talents with us! The fandom appreciates you! |
annaharding chapter 1 . 1/29/2018 Fun story! So many misleading behaviors. What a hoot! Everyone trying to cover-up their real relationships. Huh. Thanx for sharing. |
KDMCAM chapter 1 . 1/29/2018 This was adorable! |
midnitereader chapter 1 . 1/29/2018 What a shame that Bella didn't feel comfortable enough to tell her two close friends that she and Edward had gotten married. How could they stand not being together all their off work time? |
Eeyorefan12 chapter 1 . 1/26/2018 Aww, this was really cute. Even though the prompt suggested where it was going, if I had not had the prompt I would have been kept guessing until Edward and Bella went home together that night. Great job, fun characters! |
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 1 . 1/26/2018 Now the baby conversation on New Year's Eve makes sense. LOL |
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 1/25/2018 This was fantastic. I felt when she said her lease was up and she wasn’t renewing it, that she was moving in with Edward. I could tell they had more than they were letting on. I never expected that they were already married. I loved that reveal! It put a huge smile on my face. Angela not hanging out with Bella and choosing Ben instead made sense. When Bella said it had been a full year and they’d never got together outside work, I wondered why. I’m so glad that Angela explained the why behind it and asked her to dinner at her home. Loved Bella suggesting couples things. Hopefully, Ben will fit right in with the other men. I half expected Rose to announce her and Emmett were married as well. I liked that Bella suggested that she and Emmett start over again after she explains Garrett to him. Love, love, love Edward and Bella together alone. They really have a wonderful love. I’d like to read their parents reactions. And, the guys reactions. Really liked this one. |
tas62 chapter 1 . 1/25/2018 Loved this story! |
fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 1/25/2018 Funny |
dolphin62598 chapter 1 . 1/25/2018 Awwwww! I loved this! What a great one shot! |
Midnight Cougar chapter 1 . 1/25/2018 Sweet story, and great use of prompt, so creative. Good luck in the contest! |
snoopylover60 chapter 1 . 1/25/2018 Good story ;D |