As somebody who has depression, I find it appalling just how little this story understands it.

Nice ending mate, big clapping.

So, I've been wondering how best to describe this story. And I've just come back to the same conclusion each and every time. This story is bad. I mean just terrible. This whole story is just one wasted opportunity. You had something here, I'll give you that. But the over usage of the dreams was the greatest weakness. Because ultimately they didn't matter. What happens in the dream world just didn't matter at all. The interactions Linc had, the whole his sisters may not be doing as well as he thought. None of it mattered. If you wanted to make a story bout an adult Lincoln being homeless, then why didn't you make a story about adult Lincoln being homeless? Then there's Rita. My God, this has been beaten to the ground so much I just can't think of anything else that hasn't already been said about how you handled her. The abuse and the neglect disguised as doing what's best for him. Cps would've stepped in a long time ago. There are approximately 1 million words in the English language and it's still not enough to express how much this torture fic pisses me off. All in all, this story is the worst I've seen so give yourself a pat on the back for that at least.

So Bobby and Lori got married in that future sequence...

I can't help wondering what happened to Ronnie Anne in the future.

Good job finisihing the story. I feel you rushed, but it can be alright. The point is to keep writing. I'm glad to have read your story.

it is Time and Patience not patients

It's good that Lincoln didn't win. He might have found his talent, but he's 'just' found it. Passion and skill don't always make up for it if everybody else there has just as much passion and more time than a few weeks to hone their talent.

He'll get their one day. He just needs to mot let one setback make him give up.

Though admittedly, I kind of want to see a distantly epilogue now with all the Louds out their acheiving their dreams.

Will The Epipogue wiill still? If It is then this sttory is not over yet

So it has finally come to an end. The ending does show that even if Lincoln didn't win things are still taking a turn for the better for him (both in real life and in his dreams).

Aw, a happy ending, and the family of Homeless Lincoln reunites with him, I loved that scene. I don't blame Dr. Lopez for preferring the Loud family over Clyde. The final scene where they made that video was touching. Also, Mick giving his Mom (Luna) that card and showing he loved her, and he and his cousins meeting Lincoln, that was adorable. Great story friend!

Excellent story and Happy 2nd Anniversary!

Good job with the story i loved it

Bravo! The ending was incredible and magnificent!

The sisters should at least made a sacrifice and give up performing their activities for at least two months and do whatever Lincoln wants.

It's still one sided for Lincoln to support every sister in their competitions all the time but yet they never support him in his interests.

.l. Otro pinche puto premio de consolación, vas y chingas a tu puta perra madre... Bonita historia amigo