Hope you update soon but before you start the battle between Damien and Ash what are going to do to Damian? Are you going to...
A. Disqualify him for being late for his match or caught abusing his pokemon
B. Lose the battle and get arrested after he beats up his pokemon
C. Get disqualified and arrested for ordering his pokemon for attacking Ash during the battle
D. All the above
Keep up the great work. Hope you give Ash more pokemon but that's just me.

This has literally been hiding in my library for months(if not longer). I must thank you for updating because it brought it to my attention once more. I look forward to seeing how this story pans out.

You took that quote right from the movie!

So I went and read your bio and I realize that you're editing the story personally I kind of like the way the story was going I do like some of the edits that you're going to put in but I don't think you need to spend so much time editing as you do just continuing the story

Well I'm a little frustrated that you didn't continue this because you've got some great potential here and I need to absolutely amazing potential especially with all the things that happened on New Island you can really play around with the Pokemon Universe especially ashes character with that you can pretty much do whatever you want now and use that as the excuse turning him Pokemon giving him physic Powers giving him Aura making him legendary all kinds of fun little things using that scenario open the door for please add some more

Cassidea and bull s... Wait no cursing in front of the kids ... :Me

Ash: I'm not a kid

Not you:me

Ash: there no one else here?

Ash shall kill Damian. He will hide the body. Charizard will help. No one sees or hears from him ever again...

I loved the plot twists... Please continue the story... You are an amazing writer!

I hate how every1 seems to think s copy is stronger than an has lived for so long but comes a pokemon tht can speak and the world goes crazy..Worse u guys seem to think mewto could beat the creation trio hell most of u see him as a god and not Arcues..

Wow ! You’re story has improved greatly!

Hahahahahahaha mew uses curses in a similar manner to me! Hahahahahahaha (thud) Ow! flipping flying fudgemonkeyes!

...of course Lance just somehow shows up and steals the Dragonite Ash weakened and instead of saying good job he just catches it and then walks off saying he will have a Nurse Joy come.. Fucking Lance

Wow man youre fan fiction rival through the original itself.

I love this story! Can’t wait for chapter 10!

I just came across this story this morning, and read through all of it. Great job, glad to see this is still continuing. Can't wait for Damiens downfall. I'll bookmark this.