I must confess that in the beginning I didn't have much faith in history .. Especially in chapter two, however, it has captivated me! Although it is somewhat ooc in the character of the characters, I like how you have developed Ran, more mature, seductive and self-confident! I hope your inspiring muse will visit you soon and you can update, I will be waiting anxiously ! Although, I have a doubt, are you a native English speaker ? ...

Thanks for the update!

I want moreeeeeeeeeee

Yess! First update after one year!

Gin was way too OCC. Unless of course, it was intentional.

Nice story. I wonder what happens to Heiji and Kazuha afterwards?

This is so good! I wish you would continue this! We NEED MORE ShinRan 3 3 3

Finally!

Me gusta muchisimo tu historia! Espero que puedas actualixar pronto porque tengo curiosidad por saber que pasara con shinichi y ran

Ooooh, I’m really starting to Love this! Hope u continue this!

I also Love the way you write Ran’s perspective. Very good!

Will be looking forward to more. :)

XD
Kaaaakakakakakakakalalakakak
LOL
And more KaiAo pls. But come on, make a demonstration to Ran and Shinichi of what the BO can do, and that only with everyone's help they will be finish...or almost finish.
XD

More! This got to be the first funniest one!

I want to know what will happen with shinichi and ran! But also with the realtion beetwen heiji and kazuha. I hope heiji will look for kazuha and explain his feelings

Oh my god...If this is a dream then don’t wake me up... ./.

I'm waiting for the next chapter!