This was my second re-read, which was just as fun and satisfying as the first time! Damn, talk about slow BURN. You definitely know how to end a story with a bang. This story was so good! Equal parts heartfelt and sexythanks for writing and contributing to the fandom!

Me again. I may as well drop off these thoughts while they’re fresh: I am so happy with how you’ve treated the other Titans in this. Obviously, it’s a BBRae story, but it’s rooted within the family dynamic of the team, and I absolutely love it! Robin’s leadership, Kory’s girl talk and Victor’s brotherly concern are all so on point. It really enriches the story and makes it that much more of a pleasure to readalso, flustered, horny Raven is too entertaining, lol.

I wasn’t planning on leaving a proper review till the very end, but I have to say: Sassy Alfred gives me life and I’m so happy he made a little cameo in this story, lol. You’ve set up the premise really well up until this point! BB is such a sweet boi. The way you described him making the offer so earnestly was perfect, as well as Raven’s mortified response.

This was a great journey, I’m very happy to have read it.

You captured both their tragedies very well in the last few chapters.

I think this story has single handily made me hate Steve the most than I have ever have before.

One of the reasons I like beast boy so much is all the potential he’s weather knowingly or unknowingly.

You take a turn I do not expect with this story and I love every bit.

Raven is going to torture herself more if she doesn’t talk to him.

Beast boy running the titans social media pages would be a lot of fun to go through. I have no ideas where this story is going but I like it.

It’s been a while sense I sank my teeth into a completed multi chapter story. And I’m happy to start this one.

There were a few things I felt were a bit off but it could that these are different or older versions of the titans? Even then I felt that StarFire was a little much and Raven too easily convinced into things and Raven smiling and laughing in the pool without so much as saying why she laughed? Raven's humor is more sarcastic in a way and imagining her being that way with StarFire seemed off to me. This felt like a lot of fanservice and the fact that they'd talk about masturbation... I guess that's something they'd consider talking about but I don't see in any situation Raven would be at all wanting to continue that talk. That or go skinny dipping... even the build up and reasoning didn't feel like they warranted that decision.

That point aside... I like a lot of this so far. Although somethings done in this were a bit uncomfortable for me.

So far this is really good and you're writing and narrative work well but not all your reasoning's.

It's been a while since I've activley worked to review works beyond kudos on AO3, but I just had to say that this is probably the best Starfire writing I've seen in a long time. It feels almost just like the source material, aside from the more mature subjects present in this story lol. I can't tell you, though, how refreshing it is to see someone writing her in fanfic (even where she isn't the center focus) and not resorting to the same methods present in Teen Titans Go. Fantastic work on that.
Besides that, I'm really enjoying reading this, and can't wait to see how it plays out!

What a wonderful brilliant story! Such great character development! I binged this hard pretty hard and my god was it worth it! Masterpiece

Powerful Slow Burn, I Very much enjoyed the story.