This is so sweet! I absolutely love it! You wove the song in beautifully, and this is such a fantastic start to such a sweet story.

“She missed the little things he would do, before it went all wrong. And she thought about the "big" things too, like them buying their first house, starting the dental practice, their babies being born, and every other event that made their lives what it was.”

These lines are excellent. This is the detail that makes a story so enjoyable to read. KEEP IT UP, girlie!

Wow girl. I love this story soo much... My heart swelled. Keep on writing because you are a great writer.

I tried to review this earlier and the dang thing didn’t post! You have a great voice when you write! There are so many great little details you’ve mentioned that make this story! It’s so sweet, I love it! I’m so glad you decided to go for it and write today!

IM NOT EVEN HALF WAY THROUGH BUT THIS IS SO DANG CUTE ALREADY. You write so well, you’ve clearly been holding out on us.
“I love this song, it makes me think of you.” AWH. Dance with him Reba, do it! “I remember it like it was yesterday.” I am having SO. MANY. feelings right now. And they kissed! YAS HONEY. I love the connection between the two of them and I love how he calls her red. This is how I imagine them to be. Well, done. Hope to read more of your writing.

This is so sweet, Haley! You should definitely write more stories! I don't get why you were so worried on Twitter, you rock girl! KUDOS!

Hey, there! This is just a friendly reminder that we can't actually put the lyrics of songs in our fanfics, even if they're based on the song, per FFN's terms of service. It's a copyright issue. We can reference the song, suggest that the readers listen to the song as they read, etc., but not actually put in the song lyrics. Please edit your story to be in compliance with the TOS. If you need any more suggestions for how to handle the issue, feel free to PM me. ;) Thanks!

So beautiful!

Wow this was so good! I could feel the love between them and the part where Brock strokes her check and she kisses his tumb, such a small gesture but it was so full of emotion. Also I absolutely love when he whispered “I remember it like it was yesterday”. That hit me hard! This was so good for your first story! I can’t wait to read more of your writing, keep going!

See!? I told you, you had nothing to worry about! This was absolutely beautiful.

You slowed down time between them, made them realize, in a few short minutes, what they needed to all along. They love each other. They always have and they always will. Reba and Brock’s relationship has always had its ups and downs, but its ups have always seemed to outweight its downs, and that’s what makes it so beautiful. You have Reba, so strong, patient, and willing to forgive, and you have Brock, headlong, and unruly, but recognizing his mistakes and trying, really trying, to make up for them.

You’ve been holdin’ out on us, Honey Child! I’m very eager and excited to watch you progress! Cannot wait to see what else you have in store!