Re-reading after playing Red Dead Redemption 2, everyone in this story now speaks like cowboys/girls and there's no going back XD

Yaaaaaah, it's re-read time!

Love the story

huh i think i found a secret gem

Cute.

I’m looking forward to the continuation of this story. Volume 6 of RWBY has been an improvement so far. Though the ending is still kinda eh. Hopefully being in Atlas with all the conflict will make an interesting Volume 7.

Amazing story! It’s so rare to find Rwby fanfics that don’t center around the main cast, or huntsman/huntresses in general. I love that this story is about a bullhead pilot. It’s interesting to see things from a civilian’s point of view. Though I like Elster’s past as a huntress, it’s great that she also had a career as an Air Traffic Controller. And I also like that the pair just want to live the best life they can together. I always become annoyed when an OC decides to follow in the footsteps of teamRWBY and JNR to take down Salem and save Haven without a second thought. I like that Tanith and Elster are more selfish. They still have good hearts and will help however they can, but they feel like actual humans..

I honestly think waiting for vol 6 to finish is a good move, since you included the Tanith Corruption plot. I think we need to know more info about Grimm and stuff to help build the plot for this story. Anyways, thanks a lot for mention of not giving up on this tale. It’s really interesting! And unique. I can’t wait for the continuation. It’ll give you time to write chapters in advance and think of cool ideas.

I'm really digging this story, and like how the focus is away from the main cast. Tanith and Elster are adorable and interesting characters and I enjoy their antics immensely. I really think this story should get more attention, but I don't want that to let you down, for the ones that are here love it. Plz keep the laughs and the fluff coming.

They were so happy and you do that to them!
Aside from my sadness I love their version of Battleship and now plan to play it like that.

Damn it Blake. Stop being suspicious.
Aw my god Tanith and Elster? Cute. As. Heck.

Yep, Patch is much smaller than that but too late now.

"Are you scared of magnets?"

I know penny definitely was lol XD

! A date! I'm so pleased!
But Blake, Blake why?!

You are forgiven. Just keep being awesome and keeping me entertained. :)

Awesome chapter looking forward to the next update :3

Aw, I ship them!
However; "suddenly through open the shops door" it's 'threw'! Otherwise fabulous chapter, and as usual Tanith is relatable as heck.