| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Beginning of Birth |
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Guest chapter 12 . 7/17 Is there anything for 3rd year |
Noy chapter 12 . 5/9 Wait... Now they like one another ? That felt kinda rush if not outright forced. I think it's the problem I have with shippers they want their characters to be together so badly that it tends to feel more like the author is doing is damnest to push the characters in a relationship more than a natural evolution. It just doesn't feel real. |
Noy chapter 2 . 5/9 I'm going to be blunt, I couldn't care less about Ginny, she is a boring character. All we know about her in canon is that she a Weasley, she likes Quidditch and she has a temper. it's not enough to make an appealing character. I'm not a Ginny's basher because I can't hate someone I know nothing about but I can't like or care about her either. |
Constitution Chic chapter 12 . 4/19 I love it, thank you. |
Roostertheking chapter 1 . 4/8 They didn't get exam results?... What happened to the hydren going inside tje trap door... |
buterflypuss chapter 12 . 4/8 good chap |
supersandman86 chapter 12 . 4/8 It's nice that Filch didn't point the finger at Harry. Like I said before, I think Harry was the only one, besides Filch himself, that actually liked mrs Norris. And love the concern Harry has for Ginny. Unlike in the OT, he would be more observant towards her, along with Neville and Luna (who btw so totally sussed out that Harry fancies Ginny, the teasing will be unbearable cruel lol). Great chapter, let's see how it plays out for Harry during the duel club. In my opinion either play out the same that he can speak parceltongue and actually confess to being the heir of Hogwarts or play it smart this time (the more likely option) and not speak to the snake. |
lilyflower101 chapter 11 . 3/28 I always felt bad for Filch and Mrs. Norris. As mean as they are they didn't deserve for this to happen. |
squirtlee16 chapter 11 . 3/23 I hope you continue with this story. I love Harry and Neville's brother bond |
supersandman86 chapter 11 . 3/11 I love this story so far. Powerful smart Harry, a Hinny if I ever saw one. Potter bashing (seriously how dense do they have to be not to notice how strong he his over Hayden?), all house heads love him, in fact most except for Dumbledore do (probably why Filch didn't put the blame of Mrs Norris on Harry. Most likely Harry being the only one that actually likes the cat besides him). I can see a bond forming in the chamber with him and Ginny. And nice work on putting Luna in Gryffindor as well, I always felt she was alone and bullied by the other claws, so placing her with her friends (who would most likely kill anyone if they try anything with her, especially Neville). I hope you do come back to this (if you're stuck on what to write then send a PM and I'll give you a few ideas, including a lovely prank on that twit Lockhart). I always felt that Harry had a lot more power to be the Basilisk's master than a partial soul, all he had to do was be more commanding. |
Guest chapter 11 . 2/1 Characters have gotten less likable and much more idiotic since the last book. Harry especially has lost the majority of his intelligence. I don’t think I would read more even if the author hadn’t quit like a loser. |
Roostertheking chapter 6 . 10/7/2019 I finished 6chapters in 5mins... Thats how much repeating it is... POV is getting boring... And the year of start letter all wrong... Why does a2nd year get first years list... Of buying a wand... A wand is like a hand Extention for a wizard not a thing to bring only to school so they need reminding for that... And where is their mark list... You didn't say what happened with the trio entering the trap door... Only... And 11 yrs old getting Bollywood style entry of falling on the hero is bit too much... Why is Ginny wearing a pant for Hogwarts.. Where even boys wear robes? Last story was super fast and this is super slow... You need to bring your old style to get this story interesting... |
Child of Dreams chapter 3 . 9/23/2019 Frederick and Gregory Weasley? I'm pretty sure it's Fred and George, not Fred and Greg.. |
fanficnewbee chapter 10 . 9/2/2019 You seem to be struggling in the writing department, it's better to hold off a chapter update than write a filler chapter that does not further the storyline in anyway. You have some talent you just need more motivation and to trust in your ability to tell a good story. None of my comments are meant in any negative manner, I just believe you have a real good story and I don't want to see you ruin your work by lessening it in anyway. Hope I did not offend you I really do enjoy your stories. Thank-you for sharing with us. |
fanficnewbee chapter 8 . 9/2/2019 Was good. |