Lovely story, thanks for writing and sharing! Your writing of Neal’s POV in the first steps of his ci activity, of his partnership with Peter ...is just great!

Pretty sure the writer never watched the show and/or understood the character of Neal. So the story is pretty offensive.

I liked seeing Neal's uncertainty and inner thoughts. I don't however think he's that dumb not to know anything about stuff like miranda rights or about how police/FBI can't talk to someone after they ask for a lawyer.

Very interesting take on Neal's beginning at White Collar and the uncertainty he felt in various situations as well the work and rules but also his relationship with Peter before they really got comfortable with each other. Well done.

This was great! The right amount of uncertainty and innocence in Neal while still showing his intelligence and knack for understanding the human psyche. I really like the way you wrote their budding relationship. Peter is stern but nurturing as well.

that was great. i think you nailed neals thoughts. i hope you want to write a sequel!

Great insight - I really enjoyed it!

wow, I like it. It was like seeing the first episode of White Collar under a new perspective, like the fact that Neal, most of the time that didn't require his knowledge, was clueless about a lot of the things that happens in the offices of law.
The cameo of Ncis crew, mostly Gibbs, was a nice touch.
I hope I will read something wrote by you again.

And I'm also so sorry for mistakes in my English, it's not my first language and I think I'm a bit rusty.