For a comedy romance, this is pretty dark. Not to mention in a world that can reattach arms, regrow bone, and even heal shredded muscles and nerves, short of a specific piece of Dark Magic the ruined arm makes little sense. I do understand it is your story, but you need to make a plot element fit your world in a way that fits the world.

Good story!

good fi

Hem, hem. Well you've killed Herminoe, and maimed Harry; I hope you're proud of yourself young lady.

You need a better fucking reason for Harry to lose feeling in his arm. Atlesst you could've maybe blew ir off or something because they have potions to regrow a whole arm.

Decent so far. But, do not start speech with a hyphen.

Not seeing many of the humor...

F**k off.

Kind of disappointed to see Hermione was killed off.

Nice chapter...
Btw where is Fleur...
Keep it up...
AdZ

story looks good so far,
story moves at an ok pace, just would like to see longer chapters, as soon as i get into a chapter, its over. so its a little hard to get fully into the story.
other than that, i don't have much to say about it.
again, this story looks good

Um. Why is snape cheerful? (I appreciate not wanting to put this in the story, but I demand an explanation!)

Well I can't say that the chapter was among my favourites ones. Moreover I want to see where you are going and hoping you will find a way for him to not remain a cripple. Also your title says an interesting user interface but except at the beginning almost all your chapters don't talk or even hint to the interface again, I hope it will change . Nevertheless thank you for your work and until next chapter.

Sorry, but I probably won't read this story anymore, it was suppose to be Humor/Romance but it's more Angst/Tragedy/Drama for the last two chapters, and I can't stand it...

good bye story