Reviews for Expanding Territory
HunnyDreams42 chapter 6 . 6/26
I really hope you continue this very soon, I just absolutely love this story. I'm in love with all 5 of Caroline's children, you did an amazing job of incorporating them into actual breathing characters with personality's and quirks that fit amazingly into the base storyline of this fanfiction. I also love how accepting and ready Klaus is to take on the role of step father, it's adorable and admirable. It's really a hit or miss with OC's and yours were definitely a hit. The story ended on such a cliff hanger and my heart can't take that lol. I need a Klaus and Caroline reunion, I need to read of them together and finally accepting that their soulmates, and just when it was about happen in your story BOOM end chapter lol. As for your doubts and concerns towards this story I say go with your original plan (whatever that was) don't let other people's opinions and the shows canon mess with your original version of your story (so far I'm personally loving the direction it's going in). I understand your concerns with connecting to the shows but it's fanfiction, let your mind run free and create something that's different then what we all know happens in the show, even if it's a little OC that's okay because again it's fanfiction. Of course this doesn't mean your vision can't change for this story because it can but don't force anything, such as if it feels natural to keep Hayley as somewhat villain of the story then keep it that way but if you write more and it feels like she doesn't fit that role anymore then subtly change it, have her grow. Sorry for this long rant I just read your worries in chapter 5 about this story and one of the main reasons authors leave stories unfinished is because they lose their vision of their story amongst canon, reviewers, other fanfiction stories, etc and I really don't want that happening to you. Anyways though I truly love this story, it's amazing and really unique, I'm hoping for an update very soon. Thank you for sharing your story :)
Fairylibrary94 chapter 6 . 4/27
nice...I hope you still write this story...
Guest chapter 6 . 3/18
I am shocked this story doesn’t have more reviews. It’s such a great concept, I love powerful Caroline. She deserves it! I really hope you continue this story
Guest chapter 4 . 3/18
I’ve never loved Katherine more, so amazing!
imaginetvd chapter 4 . 11/27/2019
This has been one of my favourite fics since like forever and just wanted to say, once again, that it's amazing! Absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter and to see Caroline finally in New Orleans. Great writing :)
Jaz78 chapter 6 . 10/20/2019
Omfg. THAT DAMN CILF HANGER. UGH. I can’t wait until they talk to each other.
imaginetvd chapter 6 . 10/20/2019
omg i loved this chapter and definitely need more of this story!
Aliana.Gabriella.Winchester.17 chapter 6 . 10/19/2019
I'm so excited you updated. I love this story! Please continue it whenever you have the chance!:)
Livvea chapter 6 . 10/18/2019
Omg! Thank you so much for uploading I didn’t want it to be over. You’re amazing!
Kacomu chapter 6 . 10/18/2019
You make make my day with you update!
Oh why I love like it is
I want more chapters why so short?
Livvea chapter 5 . 9/29/2019
Please please I really wish you continue. Your writing is amazing
Guest chapter 5 . 5/4/2019
I love this story and am so sad you’ve decided to discontinue it with these characters :( If you do decide to do another similar story, please put Klaus’s mini in there, I love the idea of Caroline being the mom to a mini Klaus
Such a good story, you’re a great writer!
imaginetvd chapter 5 . 4/24/2019
I am in love with this concept and your writing! I hope you dont choose to abandon this fic.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/18/2019
Your story is perfect the way it is pls don’t change anything
Guest chapter 4 . 4/18/2019
Pls update
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