Well isn’t this an interesting change of direction

you know what they sayyyyy, behind every man ...

I honestly didn’t love this chapter. All this fuss about their connection, and he loves her, and their first time having sex, and now all he wants her for is training and sex? Like, yeah I get it it’s Kylo Ren, but it feels a bit cheap. I lost some of the magic in this chapter.

well damn let me fan myself, cuzzz that was hoooot

Leia is much darker in this fic, so I’m curious to see how her relationship with her son affects how the rest of how his story turns out

well, this chapter was certainly bittersweet

Oh Kylo Ren saw his baby own that room and he couldn’t resist ! periodt!

I love when women own the room! Rey’s power in this chapter !

Your passion, your anger, your RAGEEEE, Rey!

ah, and the truth comes out! you are one of the more gifted writers on this platform from reading a decent amount of your work so far, I will tell you that.

Sad boi Kylo. In denial Rey?

I would’ve loved to actually see Finn in that disguise xD

Love the slow burn, and true to character Kylo Ren. I‘m not as fond of reylo fics that just have him falling into her arms like a lovesick puppy in 0.2 seconds

I’m surprised Ren even entertained her for that long. lol

The way I screamed at the end! Clever Rey, well, almost clever enough.