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Excellent story. I hope to see more bulma an Gohan stories. You should have seen stories between future Gohan and future bulma. I think that you should give them a chance. There are many reason for them to fall for each other, plus you have lots of ideas. You should try it!

I have to say, this was one hell of a read, that is the truth. Filled with sexual tension and... sex. It was a great ride! A really good one at that. There is only one problem however, just the amount of dragging out there is in here can make one (me) kind of skim through it after about an HOUR of reading and still not in the really juicy stuff. But hey, it was all still good, and this is one of those cases of having too much of a good thing. But one can't really complain about that, it's just awesome. The more the merrier they say, and this is pretty merry. Awesome fic, awesome action, awesome. Good on ya for having the commitment to actually finish this too, holy shit!

Hey man I dont know if you remember me or not but I see your still a great writer of ecchi and lemons. glad to see your doing well in tge writing departments. how you been doing in life I hope your doing good. The one shot is great. i love big boobs and sexy females along with suckling tits. I hope to see more Bulma x Gohan x Videl x Erasa too.

Commodore Krevin said:
Continuing where I left off,
Grabbing those perfect sundae scoops before she has the chance to take them away. Fondling those puppies like he owns them! This is my all time favorite story you've written, even more than Beach Battles, and we're only like half way through this. Just wow.

Think I'm going to have end this review here and continue the rest later when I get a little more time.

But, in case it wasn't clear my friend, you matched and exceeded my fondest wish with this commission.

Gohan getting his hands on Bulma's melons! Just something so erotic about poor Gohan, being teased and tempted all this time, finally being able to cut loose. To dominating the Bulma Brief.

Seems Gohan doesn't have much better luck with towels than Bulma does with bikini's. XD

A Gobra? Is that the only kind of bra Erasa would wear? I think its fast becoming one of Bulma's favorites as well. :)

Already Bulma's bisexual fangirl, Erasa is seriously starting to enjoy her man getting to play with those boobs she so idolizes. Quickly becoming a fantasy I don't think she knew she had.

Oh, Erasa trying on Bulma's top? With her huge jugs spilling and seeping out around the oh so inadequate little scraps of material? Yep, that's a fun imagine!

But that idea will have to wait as Bulma warms up to the ministrations of a Sayian's big, strong hands on her wobbly wonders. See Bulma, told you all you had to do was wait. XD So cute seeing her try to resist when they both want it so bad. Again knowing Bulma's so desperate, so needful for a man her body is betraying her as it melts against this powerful, virile Sayian. Even if he's not her husband.

And a special word has to be given for the way in which you always turn a girl's breasts into a double edge swords. Able to melt a man's will like butter but as soon as he gets them in his hands he can turn the tables. Really adds to the eroticism, at least for me, how it becomes something of a challenge for the two of them. Always a series of give and take as the man and woman try to gain the upper hand which is missing from a lot of your peers and why I love your work so much.

And it looks like Gohan's Sayian instincts are fully engaged now. Becoming the dominating alpha male Bulma, and Erasa, are so desperately craving. Someone who isn't too busy in a gravity chamber to spend time with his smoking hot Milf of a wife. ;P

Very nice seeing him take control like this. And from a ENF perspective I like how he's lording her over flashing a couple of horny teens. Playing with those fabulous funbags all the while further driving it home.

And Bulma's loving it. Lovely contrast between Gohan's forceful, but still sweet, domination and Vegeta's more cocky, rougher one by the way. And this is everything Bulma was hoping for, earlier. Even if it isn't the man she wanted doing it.

And Gohan knows it too. Knows how much having her boobies played with against her will is turning her on.

Fun seeing him coax her into admitting it. Admitting that beneath her composed image of a wife and mother there's still that man-eating party girl dying to get out. Who lusts for men to play and admire her sexy body. And it looks like today's that girl's lucky day as well.

And then he follows that up playing with her bountiful boobies with a wet, savage kiss. Heh, careful Gohan. You might have bitten off more than you can chew with the Bulma Brief here. She has a lot of "neglect" to make up for after all.

Ah Master Roshi never change. XD Through at least Bulma appreciates Gohan groping that sweet apple of an ass more than the Turtle Hermit.

Oh and Bulma and Erasa now? Yep that's the best idea in the history of Mankind. Seeing Bulma's perky pair compete against Erasa's softer vanilla scoops. Rubbing and sliding up against each other in the water.

Damn right he fantasied about it! How could he have Erasa as a girlfriend and have you Bulma as a family friend and not?

Bulma maybe straight as an arrow but, she's definitely enjoying this as well. From stripping Erasa to dominating the poor girl's boobs with her breasts she's loving paying the happy Blonde back for all those gropings she suffered at her hand.

I'm not sure who's more excited. Erasa seeing her boyfriend play with the Bulma Brief's boobs or Gohan seeing Bulma play with his girlfriend's massive jugs. Or us the audience getting both!

I stand corrected. It's "story time" with Bulma. Watching the Bluenette act out an ENF with Erasa's chubby girls. Oh boy you are one lucky man Gohan. Definitely are going to want to offer prayer to Dende or whomever in gratitude for this moment.

Seeing her walk Erasa through it step by step you can tell Bulma knows exactly about this because she's lived it. She's been Erasa teasing showing off her big boobs in low cut tops getting all the boys to look. The dangers her prized femininity can get into.

So Gohan first realized about Erasa's "Orange Stars" seeing her play at volleyball? Damn...the poor girl can barely control her boobies at the best of times. I can't even imagine what it would be like, her bouncing around hitting a ball back and forth over the net. No wonder her games always sold out first.

The attention to detail, the incredible invocative prose, to a story within a story. Seeing Bulma play with Erasa's big, bodacious boobs the entire time acting the scene out...its amazing. Beyond incredible.

Heh, looks like Bulma is enjoying "story time" as much as I am. Slowly becoming more turned on and lust filled playing with Erasa's soft fucking tits until...sweet Jesus if life was an anime I think I'd have just died from blood loss. :)

Bulma Brief, one of the sexiest women in Dragon Ball, has her face buried sucking on Erasa's big, bodacious boobie. This is the absolute best Dragon Ball fanfic ever.

The Bluenette finally getting to learn why Vegeta and Yamcha before him enjoyed so much. There is just something about dominating a busty girl through her breasts! And of course…Bulma’s still straight as an arrow. Just like Master Roshi who’d be doing the same thing in her position so obviously she’s straight. XD
Yes, that’s the hottest thing Gohan has seen. So far. Oh we’re just getting started, aren’t we? When you rev up an engine like Bulma.
And Bulma learns never turn you back on a horny Erasa. Or is that always turn your back on a horny Erasa.

Damn getting to watch a busty blonde make out with Bulma…so both Gohan and Erasa’s fantasies have been fulfilled. Oh, the nice mental image of one of Bulma’s Double-D sundaes being caught and molested by Erasa’s two big jugs…superb!

Words can’t even begin to describe the two of them. The older, more experienced Bulma and the more naïve but exuberant Erasa…pure yuri ambrosia. I can’t thank you enough for writing this. This is beyond anything I could have hoped for.

Yeah Bulma, it’s going to take more than a “teenage girl” to overwhelm you. There’s also her boyfriend you need to worry about. Well more like salivate over, heh. Ooh, now’s she found it. Staring at Gohan’s big bulge while he gropes pulling her towards him with his feet.

I’m pretty sure by this point Gohan’s bang is down and that’s about the only thing. Everything else is rising. I’m loving it. Gohan has gone from his timid, usual self to the assertive sayian he always deserved to be. Ordering the sexy milf, his best friend’s mother, to suck him off like a boss. And we all know that’s exactly the sort of man Bulma wants…no needs. Someone who can boss her around, fight her toe to toe with her. This is who she’s been sitting by the pool waiting for.

Ordering her to finish stripping is a nice touch. Again showing his dominance.

And oh boy seeing Bulma’s response. So getting ordered by planet-busters gets her wet huh? I love Gohan’s response when he realizes that wasn’t just words. And we see just how wet she’s gotten over him. She’s his girl now. As much as Erasa is.

If I didn’t already fantasize about Maron’s yellow one piece I do now. Just awesome.

And Bulma gets Gohan’s attention back in one swift, simple motion which shows just why she’s one of the most sexy girls on DB. And Bulma is tired of waiting. She’s going to have herself everything she’s been craving. What only a man can give her.

Love these quick, cute little bits of fluff you insert. In this case Videl losing her swimtrunks. Really helps the worldbuilding and establish a sense of history to this world. That it existed before this story and will continue doing so after it. Plus you know, Videl’s swimtrunks getting snagged and flashing Gohan is hot!

And Bulma gets a look at her prize. Heh, the lady has been through space, hunted for magical wish granting orbs as a teenager and married an alien prince from a doomed homeworld. And the only thing which gives her even a moment’s pause is seeing Gohan’s “horse-cock”. And yet *this* is something neither science nor magic can explain. And for the record she’s seen her best friend turn into a giant monkey because of moon light. Thankfully Bulma has never backed down from a challenge yet.

If anything is better than banging Erasa on a regular basis, and I’m not sure there is, its seeing Bulma savagely assaulting your dick like it was the last morsel of food and she was starving. This is amazing buddy!

That was awesome.

I think that this was everybody's lucky day except for Vegeta he missed out

Really like it, but it's so long for one chapter...

wow

This was marvelous

Nice chapter! Funny and entertaining. The Title really fits, Gohan has had a very lucky day. Getting to be with two sexy busty babes, while getting the third one in all her glory. Bulma, Erasa, and Maron, all in one place, completely exposed, seems like the DBZ guys need to learn a thing or two from the Demi Saiyans!

As always you are too modest, my friend. The only reason you took the time you did was because you were determined to make this story the best it could be. Going above and beyond my own rather modest proposal. And the results were well worth the wait.

Let's just say the story starts off in the best possible way with Bulma at her most sexy and Milf like. Laying by the pool in her most "Fuck me Vegeta" bikini. The detail of which as she takes stock of her sexy, mature body and how it has "grown" since she was a teen. Especially those big, round boobs of hers. I agree, I'd think we'd all kill to get a peek at those. Honestly if I had those big melons waiting for me I'd tell Kakarot he could be the strongest in the universe. I wouldn't care anymore.

And then there's what she did with what has to be the luckiest ice cube in the world. When she started slipping it beneath her tiny top and pressing it around against her breast...oh boy! Obviously I'm biased but more than just the act itself, which was spectacular, there is just something erotic both in seeing a woman please herself by playing with her big boobs and knowing she's so desperately needs it.

And you captured that desperation perfectly. Bulma lying there, eyes half closed, as she played with those two great sundaes of hers calling out to Vegeta. Fantasying its his hands she feels groping those spectacular breasts of hers. Whose inadequacy for the real thing grows alongside her fueled lust. That scene alone was worth the price of commission. Bulma panting, moaning Vegeta's name. Her tits cupped together peeking out from her bikini as she rubs that lucky ice cube all around them.

That ice cube...he certainly made the most of his time didn't he? Clamping his "mouth" around one of Bulma's hard as stone nipples. And the poor Bluenette letting go causing her top to trap it there! I salute you, little perverted ice cube.

Ooh, nothing quite like a buxom chick getting caught playing with her boobs. XD Again like above its not only just the act itself, through as a ENF fan I greatly appreciate it, but knowing her man has been neglecting her to the point she has to do this adds spice to the whole thing.

Poor Bulma struggling to get that pesky ice cube, which still got the last laugh splintering apart clinging to her boob, and getting those boobs of her at least somewhat covered before Gohan and Erasa see.

I bet Erasa, perhaps even more than Gohan, appreciated the sight of Bulma's jugs slick looking like she'd just poured water all over them. Her greeting for the Bluenette...I mean you can't really improve upon a stacked Blonde sliding her hands underneath copping a feel of a Bluenette's double-D sundaes. And it just seems so Erasa who's this lovely mix of this outgoing, beautiful woman and a five-year old on a sugar binge.

First a perverted ice cub and now a Blonde. The whole universe is in love with Bulma's boobies. And deservedly so.

What a treat for Gohan who got to see his sexy as hell girlfriend play with Bulma's treasures. Well it doesn't seem like much compared to what's going to happen but at the time I'm sure Gohan couldn't have thought of anything he'd wanted more. XD

While adorkable Gohan shouldn't feel too conflicted about staring at Bulma's scantily clad, voluptuous body. This "old, nearly family" friend met his father by offering to show him her panties, which he later stripped from her and literally "tapped" that. So in a way he's just carrying on a family tradition. XD

Okay...I really do love that conflict. How's he's trying to be good but his thoughts keep coming back to two very large things bouncing in front of him. Which really adds to something you don't see in a lot of fanfics, lemon or otherwise. The detail that you put into characterizations. Too many writers it would be like "Bulma's top fell off and it was hawt" or something while you really build the emotions swirling through everyone's head, their thoughts ect. I know I've said it before but, more than even your invocation prose, I like that your characters feel "real".

Through of course, being the good guy he is, Gohan does finally put a stop to Erasa's "Blonde hello". Prying the Blonde off of Bulma. Which is totally the right thing to do and is in character but still...boo! Just kidding.

Heh, Gohan trying to hide the effect seeing his girlfriend play with Bulma's jugs. Guess Bulma isn't the only one who has something to be embarrassed about. In his case a certain big something...

Well Erasa's hands may be a poor substitute for a Sayian's manly hands but it looks like Bulma was enjoying it all the same. Even if she is "straight as an arrow" those treasures of hers have been neglected too long to be picky. Not to mention if there's one thing Erasa knows, besides how to handle a certain half Sayian, its her way around a pair of boobs.

Still Bulma keep wishing. You just might get a pair of strong, Sayian hands groping those jugs of yours before you know it. It just won't be Vegeta's. XD

Heh, looks like Bulma just noticed Gohan isn't a little kid anymore. All hot and bothered from her own efforts and being topped off by Erasa...saying Gohan's big Sayian bulge just out of reach. Doesn't take a mind reader to know what she's thinking. Even if she'd never admit it!

Oh Dende, Erasa's meeting with Chi Chi! Erasa sure has a way of greeting people doesn't see? On the bright side you can't say their first meeting was forgettable at least. Heh, maybe Chi Chi is some kind of secret disciple of Master Roshi? Because how she stripped Erasa certainly seemed a stunt he'd pull. The Blonde's Double-E boobies bouncing out right in Chi-Chi's face...and then giving the conservative mom a "puff-puff" the old Turtle Hermit would envy!

And it looks like Chi Chi kind of liked having her face pillowed between Erasa's...er Chi Chi's. Frankly I love how beneath the exterior of a mom and loving wife you give the raven-haired woman this wild side just begging to be nourished and brought out. Seriously Goku, Chi Chi is more than willing to give you a far superior workout than anything you could get on King Kai's planet. Or if you'll give her a week or two to acclimate she could do it *on* King Kai's planet. But I digress...

Oh, Erasa's so adorable! Blushing as Bulma rightly points out she was building up a lot of karma with how she plays with Bulma's breasts. And we have Gohan standing up and defending his girl. Which is turning on Bulma as much as it is Erasa.

Trunks and Maron...what can I say but like Father like Son? XD Vegeta fell in love with a busty Bluenette and Trunks went and found a girl that turned up to eleven! I mean damn...Maron is a work of art and you know just how to write her.

That "Blue Kiss"...just goes to show that if any mortal can crumble the demi-gods of DBZ to their knees its Maron. Her entire body built for pleasure, a weapon she has honed to perfection with a zeal Goku or Vegeta would appreciate.

Their entire scene together was pure, perfect bliss. The detailed prose, the interactions, Maron's playful yet sultry forceful persona. The implied competition between her and Mai for the half Sayian's affection. The exceedingly teasing way she cleaned up Trunk's cock afterwards...I couldn't ask for more.

Even with his Sayian stamina I'm amazed Trunks can keep up with her.

Heh, "Grope Bulma's Boobs Because She is a Successful Female Idol" totally should be a thing! XD Yeah Bulma, nothing wrong with admiring Gohan's hard, toned chest. What can go wrong inviting the two of them to lounge with you by the pool? :)

And Gohan's thoughts again run away with. Not that its hard with both Erasa and Bulma in a bikini in front of him. Its something of a miracle he can concentrate on anything else.

Relax Gohan, you'll be thanking Erasa before this is over. XD

The match up of the century! Bulma's bodacious boobies vs Maron's marvelous melons. Step up and place your bets folks!

And I agree with Erasa. I'd never let go of Maron's 34GG's either. Ah what torture, having your busty girlfriend keep talking about other busty women's jugs in front of you. Through its really cute seeing her thoughts on some of her most favorite pairs of breasts.

So Maron's boobies are made for a man-sized hands huh? I'm sure you'd make do, Erasa, if given a chance. But still it looks like Bulma's edges out for being the perfect size for a boy, or a girl, to play with.

Again Gohan tries to control his thoughts only to have it slowly unravel under a sea of hormones. Slowly becoming more and more erotic despite his best attentions as he thinks of his friend's sexy, stacked Mom. Really drives home his desperation and the taboo underlying their growing arousal. Of course it isn't like Trunks never had a similar problem...:)

Hello there mental image of Eighteen in a wet T-shirt. You are most appreciated.

Ooh, bad move Gohan. You do not imply you don't find Bulma sexy around her number one, bisexual fan. Now its a matter of honor and the happy Blonde to prove everyone finds Bulma as sexy as she does.

Pointing out that "lil Gohan" certainly seems to like Bulma's boobies in a teeny, tiny string bikini. Point for Erasa! Then match with how casually she flashes those big ol' melons of hers at her boyfriend. All while saying she isn't the "jealous" type when it comes to Bulma's sundaes.

I really do love the interaction between her and Gohan. She's the perfect person to help bring him out of his shell as it were. Where as with Maron its almost a contest of wills Erasa is just a carefree, sunny girl who wants to stoke those fires in her boyfriend.

Yep. Maron even in a thick sweater would be dangerous to think about. Let alone her in the skimpiest bikini.

My Bulma has an active imagination, doesn't she? XD Erasa should just be thankful Bulma doesn't go to Orange Star with them or she'd have snapped up Gohan long before he'd have a chance to ask Erasa out.

Whoops! Getting caught fondling yourself while fantasying about a teenage boy...way to go Bulma!

Again the slowly building chemistry between her and Gohan...I love it! She knows she shouldn't, that she's a married woman, but she can't help it. Gohan's activating the wanton sex kitten part of Bulma and its screaming at her that there's a hunk of a man mere feet away. Willing, eager and virile.

Got to laugh at the little "tea-party" between her and Chi Chi. I do wonder what she'd say through. Explode in rage or admit she'd had similar thoughts about a certain violet-haired half Sayian? XD Okay I promise, I'll stop making references to "Soaked Trunks".

Damn Gohan nearly wedged his face between those puppies of Bulma's. She certainly isn't making it easy for him...

And Erasa wearing Maron's yellow one piece. Life is now complete. I mean how do you top one of the curviest girls wearing the skin tight little outfit that molds itself to a woman's ample curves?

By having Bulma decide to jump in the pool after her and show the buxom teen how its really done. That's how!

Cute window into her thoughts. At the twinge of jealousy of Erasa "stealing" Gohan away from her. She really is the Queen through. She's probably forgotten more about seduction than Erasa has had a chance to learn yet.

And now she's topless! On accident, completely unaware she's giving two teenagers the show of a lifetime. And to anyone who thinks Erasa may be just a "dumb blonde" the fact she could restrain herself so as not to ruin the show for her and Gohan should put that to rest.

Damn Bulma is devious and sexy. Knowing how to entice a man with those beautiful breasts of hers. Of course she's in for a bit a of shock when she realizes she's been flashing a couple of teenagers this entire time.

Actually half surprised Master Roshi didn't somehow astral project himself after a declaration like that.

Bulma's reaction is of course perfect. Just the right juxtaposition from being in control, dominating a couple of inexperienced teens to realizing everything's on display, vulnerable and exposed. She just took one helluva of a dive in the span of a few seconds.

And it looks like Gohan can only take so much stimulation before his Sayian instincts kick over. Grabbing those perfect sundae scoops before she has the chance to take them away. Fondling those puppies like he owns them! This is my all time favorite story you've written, even more than Beach Battles, and we're only like half way through this. Just wow.

Think I'm going to have end this review here and continue the rest later when I get a little more time.

But, in case it wasn't clear my friend, you matched and exceeded my fondest wish with this commission.

I can see why this took months to finish. It's a monster! I can eee your passion for DBZ bleed through on the writing:)