Well, this is a really good story. And who cares that the female predator looks like anyone but actually a predator. More OOC to the OOC master :)
But the family! Seriously? For example that part "Jake, this is your dad". Where on Earth do children who can't recognise their parents live?

Fucking amazing

I liked the end!

Shit had me at sabaton
Nicht ein Schlacht, ein Rettungsaktion!

Amazing! I cried at the end. I hope you do plan on an epilogue!

Very good story … so far. Have already started on your sequel. I like how the plot/story line has logically evolved from boy meets girl (Yautja) and they explore their romantic feelings to … boy and girl team up to fight Bad Bloods and get both hurt badly to … human soldiers find the boy separated from girl and evacuate him for medical treatment. The story apparently serves the role of cliffhanger and prologue/back story for what will be your sequel with really interesting plot developments. The two most interesting characters to me in terms of how they grow and develop are Jake (boy) and Walter (father) and their complex but caring family relationship. Will have to go back and reread chp 20 again because I did not figure out how Jake and Tawaya failed to kill the last bad blood when their plan worked perfectly and Tawaya had snuck-up-behind-him with her weapons ready to kill him? At least I think the bad blood got away? Thanks for excellent story.

What a fucking lame ending.

Hope to see a sequel. Please make it

Wow! What an amazing end to the story that just hits right in the feels and an amazing blend of excitement and high tension that just begs for more. I'm with the others on that I definitely want to see more of these two if even it's just a small epilogue of a brief encounter between the two or maybe another full story *wink wink*. Excellent story and I enjoyed all of it, keep up the good work.

So much emotion and friendship I'd love to see just a short chapter at least a few years after this where they meet again for a proper goodbye. Still i had fun so good work.

I really enjoyed the story! I hope you write others, even if unrelated!

Great and wonderful story hope to see an epilogue

I have been following this story for a good while now and I've gotta say, I loved reading every part of this story, and I'm glad to have found it. There are not enough Human male x female Yautja stories out there. I hope that you make more and I for one would like to see a epilogue to tie up this wonderful story. You earned yourself a follower good sir. I hope to see many more wonderful works from you in the coming future.

Wow love this story.

Also will there be a sequel where Jake recovered and eventually meets tawaya again and maybe she takes him to her world to live?

Or will jake hate tawaya for nearly getting him killed and says he found a new girl and never wants to see her again?

Thanx for a wonderful story! i hope that you will continue with this with a sequel because its so good. keep up the good work