| Reviews for Jealous |
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Miraculous101 chapter 1 . 5/5 HOW DARE YOU I'M A LUKAETTE SHIPPER I WAS PROMESSD THAT ADRIAN WOULD BE JELLY OF LUCA! |
alessathegreathero chapter 1 . 9/27/2018 this is bad -sorry |
animaniac chapter 1 . 5/20/2018 shit got real fast |
catspats31 chapter 1 . 1/14/2018 Despite the okay writing quality that this story has so far, I'll give you a heads up that the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken: Entries not allowed: 6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries. Please use dialogue similar to: "I need to go," Chat Noir said. Add some description and detail behind what's going on. The admins frown upon stories in chat/script format because it erases all of the artistic choice and technical skill from writing and reduces it strictly to events without any sort of prose or emotion. It shows they're more impressed by what rather than how, and how is the most important part of any creative endeavor. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2018 Look I'm guessing you're new because I checked your profile but she fell in love with Luka and Chat to fast that goes the same for Adrien realising that he likes her. Plus Tiki will never curse in any circumstances. I hope this helps with future stories. |