Reviews for Naruto's Game |
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![]() ![]() ![]() uhhhh chapter 6 is broken |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, this would be an amusing one-shot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what in the hell happened here? this chappie is a nightmare to read |
![]() ![]() There is potential but I feel like you were in too much in a hurry to propely explain the Mizuki part or Naruto's growth. P.S Chapter 6 needs to be rewritend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() huh |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude I think you need to edit chapter 6 but all in all a great story so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story but the last chapter is strange |
![]() ![]() ![]() last chapter is screwed up |
![]() ![]() ![]() ty for the chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... love the story but... what is this chapter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 6 is wierd. As in codes seem to have taken over the chapter making it hard to read the actual text. Other than that I really enjoyed the story so far. Great work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() U copied the mind thingy from some old gamer why waste time on mana when u have chakra and u didn't master even if Naruto wasn't a dove he would still be placed in team7 |
![]() ![]() Naruto casually blowing people's minds XD |
![]() ![]() Well that escalated quickly lol. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() From what I have been able to read of this story so far has been fantastic, I have been hooked since the first chapter though it would be in your best interest to fix chapter 6 before continuing on... I tried to read through the jumbled writing but found it difficult to concentrate. |