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Hey there :)
You know what I think? This story jas waaaay too few reviews! I love how you write Team AKAM(?)
(Besides, Achilles is the coolest heroic spirit in my opinion and there are not nearly enough fanfics aboit him :() Hope to read another chapter in the future
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Podrias aser un omake o bonus donde se encuentra todos en caldea juntos como una familia

You have made an interesting story more interesting keep up the good work.

Please continue.

Awesome story, when's the next chapter going up, I hope to see more soon. I hope mordred gets her eye fixed, maybe morgan could be convinced to do it or something. Also I really hope mordred, Achilles, Atalanta and Karna make it to the end to have a happy ending. Love the family relationship, though I want to see Atalanta reaction to mordred calling her big sis, that should be amusing.

Hey dude didn’t you say some time ago that this was from tumblr?

buen fanfic-good fanfic

That was hilarious!

But it might not be over for poor Jeanne just yet! Has she discovered that Rider is a boy? Or is that 'traumatizing' surprise still to come for her?

Intesting start

Good chapter, and i still hste sieg

Hey great chapter! It took me a while to find some some time to be able to check what has been updated and i'm glad you literally updated the day after i posted my first review. Cant wait for the next one in june! On another note i cant wait for the Apocrypha event to hit NA too bad that wont happen for another 2 years, I just want to be able to roll for Brochilles and the other 3 Apocrypha servants that aren't in NA yet to have the full Apocrypha cast :(

Definitely just marathoned your story in 2 days lol, i really enjoy it. I enjoy and like the bigger focus on the servants especially karna, mordred, achilles, and atalanta who were without a doubt my favorite servants in fate apocrypha. Anyways I cant wait for more :D

So many faces makes me very curious about who Shakespeare will use his Noble Phantasm on in this story. Like Jeanne, it would have to be on a Servant whose myth/history is more well known to fans. Now Vlad would be a most riveting target! So many terrible things in his past, and then the legend that dragged his name and his family through the mud. For Vlad to see it, all at the hands of another writer tarnishing his image... it's perfect!

If anything else, I'm also quite intrigued by the stats created for the 'False Servants', particularly Morgan Le Fay. I have been giving serious consideration over the last few months to making a story of my own, a crossover with this Fate universe. Aside from plotting out the story, I could use some assistance in determining the crossover character's stats. Even though his character has been well-defined across his series, he makes for a first-rate Servant and that makes it tricky to not only determine but to balance his stats.