nice writing style! I was super excited since Marco x Luffy is such a rare pairing but your Luffy is a little too OOC and know it all for me, bummer :/ nice gramar etc tho

please Update soon

I find myself really liking the way you portrayed Kuro in this fic! This is really REALLY cool! Super looking forward to the next chapter. God bless!

I love this story ! it's such an original concept, and suprisingly I find myself loving Kuro, waiting for the next chapter ! thank you

OMG YASSSSSSS. This may just be the best one piece fanfic Ive read before. I cant wait for you to update. Hope you and your loved ones are doing well in these troubling times.

Love the story. Eating for the next chapter

Love the concept of this doc! Your doing a great job character building the new and original crew members with dialogue. Although, it seems like they haven’t experienced any remotely difficult battles yet- it will be interesting to see what kind of twists you need to create to give them some!

I love this story thank you author for righting it

Nice chapter, good work.

Two new crew members~
Luffy's reunion with Mihawk was really cute.
Thanks for the new update! :)

Great so far, I look forward to reading more in the future.

I love this I love this so much I never read a fic where kuro gin nor aarlong got any sort of role in a fic beside the one given in the show. Please continue the story I'm excited to read more!

I love it I need more fanfics like this one

please write more i Love your storry

yush so glad i found a new chapter for this when i came back around to the one piece fanfictions.