Omgggg. I am a big fan of this. It's fluffy, but like... in a dark, sort of twisted way. I am obsessed and need 11k more of this. :P

You've left me with so many questions. I need the history here, Sophie. I need it. Why is Remus a prisoner? Why is he *Sirius'* prisoner? WHAT HAPPENS NEXT? I need to know. And I know you wrote this almost two years ago, but the premise is soooo good. I need to see where this leads.

The dialogue here was incredible. Remus seemed spookily devoted to Sirius, and you did a really great job of handling the Stockholm Syndrome. It's really obvious in Remus' behavior—it gave me chills. I am so here for that. Sirius' dialogue was also very well done; I was on the edge of my seat while reading. The details you included really helped the scene to jump out at me, and I could picture everything vividly as I read.

Amazing job!

Wow. I'm without words because as dark and grim as this is, I love it. The twisted relationship is great; I like how subtle Sirius' gentleness is compared to the harshness of the situation.
The best is Remus's dialogue. How deeply disturbed he sounds when speaking words that should be romantic and sweet ties up the fic really well. I'm amazed.