Reviews for Harry Potter Rise of the Paladins |
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AnimeGoji91 chapter 3 . 4/25 Awesome and kick ass story and please continues this story please because I what to see battle of Jedi and Sith too!? |
AnimeGoji91 chapter 2 . 4/25 I going to said The future is The Rise Of Darth Vader and The Rise Of The Empire and hope they can stop the Dark Lord before it too late! |
AnimeGoji91 chapter 1 . 4/25 Darius is good and Master of the Gray Jedi and he not like that Asshole Dumbledore and he good to be Harry's Master too!? |
Lordlexx chapter 1 . 9/20/2019 I gotta say, a dino planet isn't one I'd choose to colonize. Also, they are far to trusting of this new guy. Just sayin. |
Currahee506 chapter 3 . 5/23/2019 More please |
STichtopher chapter 3 . 5/12/2019 Great story so far hope it updates soon |
Zandaino-Nova-Ari chapter 3 . 5/2/2019 This story is worth a follow in my opinion, just hope it gets updated soon |
robert chapter 3 . 8/19/2018 is this story discontinued or will there be more |
Shadowkragg chapter 3 . 7/24/2018 Very interesting start to this story. Looking forward to reading more! |
HairyLimey chapter 3 . 7/12/2018 Please update again soon. |
Dragonman110 chapter 3 . 7/2/2018 Please update when you've got the time. |
Milagro626 chapter 3 . 6/21/2018 Will you be updating again soon? |
bleacher chapter 3 . 6/6/2018 totally awesome |
enji-benjy chapter 3 . 5/25/2018 A good start, it will be interesting to see what affect the Paladins have on the galaxy, so far not a lot has changed but it is still early days. Grammatically this still needs some work, but I've mentioned that before. |
enji-benjy chapter 2 . 5/25/2018 When did Padme turn on on Tera 6? Did your mean Padma? You need to put some sort of indicator to show scene changes. As this currently reads, Harry entered the pilots seat, took off entered hyperspace and then ran into the cockpit with Draco. Either this is written in the wrong order, or there was a scene change/time skip. Further to this, you jump from the new ship en route to Naboo back to Fawkes on Earth without so much as a paragraph break! I hope this story doesn't get too bogged down with Earth. Go in, get the people/creatures out and leave the idiots to get wiped out by the muggles. |