Reviews for Jaune becomes a FATHER?
Simplyhiccstrid chapter 12 . 6/15
God I can’t wait for more!
246vili chapter 12 . 4/26
Cinsidering Jaune's mom is an experienced warrior, he held his ground pretty well.

No problem about the long wait. It's enough for me to know you won't abandon this story.

Keep up the good work and stay healthy.
aa.sourav chapter 4 . 4/26
Wouldn’t Brutus be a better name than Romulus?
R-king 93 chapter 12 . 4/25
Awesome chapter
warrior of six blades chapter 12 . 4/25
I can understand the parent's worry for if Jaune is ready or not, and his mother is one DANGEROUS fighter in armed combat as she is unarmed. I really like how she strategically wore Jaune down with her bow and arrows with dust tips of various types to keep him guessing, though the smoke screen really gave her a lot of free shots despite his best efforts to fend her off.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30
I don’t like it, I liked the other one better, this one looks more of an Adventurous Arc than a Father Arc...
yugioh8392 chapter 11 . 3/23
Really liking this so far hope it doesn't just stop randomly I understand , that as the author, that's your choice but I'm enjoying this story and a majority of these types of stories just kinda end up dead which is really upsetting bc a lot of them are really enjoyable to read this one included
246vili chapter 11 . 11/23/2019
Nice spar.
I dread to think of how deadly Jaune's mom is with her weapons.

Keep up the good work.
R-king 93 chapter 11 . 11/22/2019
Great chapter
X3runner chapter 11 . 11/22/2019
Yangs complements don’t sell well do they but that’s what makes them seem all the better since you know they are honest complements.
warrior of six blades chapter 11 . 11/21/2019
So...Jaune had a spar with his mother who is honestly a beast in terms of hand to hand combat, I can only wonder and dread the idea of facing her with weapons...while part of me looks forward to the idea.

Still, Vlad needs to chill if the glare was that freaking hard over what Yang said. Sure, it may sound careless, but if she wants to get cocky then it's on her ass when she finds out he is NOT to be underestimated.
Crossoverlover242 chapter 9 . 10/15/2019
Love it.
NerdLord2nd chapter 3 . 8/27/2019
Enjoying story so far just one thing that comes as wrong the incident with the carrot cake and coco framing someone else for it and it leading to a somewhat on going grudge against the framee doesn't really come across as the funny I think you were going for, instead it kinda makes Coco and seem a bit malicious in that act especially since she seems to still find it humorous some time after
AsimpleLaymen chapter 10 . 8/19/2019
Hey, would you mind adding a bit more of the girls fighting over Jaune? ( and Jaune being utterly clueless about it XD)
246vili chapter 10 . 8/9/2019
Thx for the update. No problem about the long wait.
Looking forward to the spar between mother and son.
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