I'll admit I mostly read this out of morbid curiosity as to how one would write skeletons having sex, but this was surprisingly good. It makes sense to me; the inside of the ribcage is an intimate place that I assume most people in the Land of the Dead don't let others touch.

M rated sexual Disney fics...is it wrong that I find some of them so intriguing? When they're done right, mind you, not like pwp or a parody or pointless erotic stuff. It's all in how they're written really. Marvelous job. I can now believe that this Pixar-created world can get a little more...adult.

but you made it work in the end? lol i enjoyed it!

Good god, this was a thrilling read! I was so SCANDALIZED and excited! Wonderful, wonderful! I'm so pleased by the idea that they can still do this kind of stuff as skeletons.

I freaking love this. After reading so many good fics about hector and imelda, i was ready for smut. I didnt expect to read smut about them as skeletons. But you freaking nailed it. Even though im not entirely of bones, your writing made me feel what they feel. I melted at the words where hector played her ribs with skillful musician fingers. That was hot. Plus i love hector and imelda's interactions in here. Like hector's devilish smile and imelda putting up a tough front even in her mind while the readers could see right through her.

I also love how you explore sex in the afterlife. It IS weird but interesting at the same time. I did expect it would be like how i would see smut about papyrus and mettaton, papy instinctively formong an energy equipment down there but this fic is also an interesting way of how skeletons would do it.

Weird but good.

I am amazed at this story really, you did a brilliant job translating something from the living world into the world of the dead and making it real there. Great story, thanks for posting it!

...did I just read skeleton porn?...
Don't get me wrong it was well written.
but I think I just bought my bus pass to hell...
Lol see you there.

Beautifully written and very clever. Thank you for daring to "go there" for us.

I'm just like...wow...great story!
After watching the movie, I was hoping someone would make an "adult" fiction with these two characters. Very well written and I hope to see(read) more from you in the future.