! I loved it!

WHO WOULD HAVE THOUGHT FLOUR WOULD OUT HIS SECRET, LMHO. GOOD FIC! KUDOS!

I really liked this

I've always liked the idea of, everybody knows, and its the worst kept secret in amity park.

How cute! Lovely story, plus I got a good chuckle from Wes being included ahaha! :D

think u should make another chapter that he does finally tell them

this was a hilarious story, quick and easy read. Beautiful execution, just remember to proofread!

'No PP' I read this out loud xD And Now I am dying :)) Wow I am weirdd

There are a few mistakes towards the end:

"What was that!?"she shouted" -
Danny is not a she, nor should any "she" be present during a boy's lock in.
It should be "he".

"Dash's violence was NOT minimized to a bit of name calling. Nothing big just a few puns off Danny's name here and there"

Minimized means to lessen or make smaller, so if Dash's violence was NOT minimized, he'd still be doing the exact same stuff he did before.
The "not" has got to go- otherwise this part makes no sense.
There should also be a comma after "nothing big", but that's a pretty minor error compared to the other two.

But I have good news.
Other than these small, super easy to fix errors, the story has no mistakes, and I quite enjoyed this little adventure.
Remember to proofread, and keep up the good work.

superb~~~

Hi!
Oh man, this is GOLD!
Even with a sack of flour turning Danny’s hair white and some parts of his pyjamas white so that it looked like Danny Phantom’s HAZMAT suit, they STILL couldn’t connect all the dots that Fenton is Phantom(well, except for Wes Weston but then again, he already figured out Danny’s secret)
Oh man, I LOVE Wes’ inclusion in this story! Is it weird that I found Wes’ attempts at saying to the others that he knew about Danny’s secret all along hilarious? He’s just so freaking cool!
Well, at least Dash and Lancer have made Danny’s life a little easier(even though they haven’t figured out the WHOLE truth, unlike a certain basketball jersey-wearing redhead...)
Keep on writing!
GhostWriterGirl out!

This is great! I will admit that it seemed rushed, but very good for 2am. Can’t wait to read your other works!

Keep writing!

Oh, man! I love Wes! Is that weird? He's just so obliviously unoblivious! XD
This is great! Can't waitto see what you come up with next!
God bless! :) - Ellie