| Reviews for After the Battle - The Beginning of the End |
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   SaturnTails chapter 4 . 7/25 Love it. Funny, sexy and a bit serious. Let there be more! |
| KieraRaelyn chapter 4 . 5/26 What?! What happened to that next chapter? It's been almost two years... *pouts* Even without it, though, lovely story. I very much enjoyed it. |
| The White Leopard chapter 4 . 2/5 First of all, the puns! You crack me up. Second, Grade A smut, you have here. ;) Very nice. And last but far from least, I really enjoy this fic. Everything about it makes me happy. They both are willing to retire for true love, and then they find out they don't actually have to because their kwamis are sneaky little shits. Plus the little dash of Serious Business about Mari's very valid reason for wanting to retire in the first place. I just...really like it. |
| Adena McGee chapter 4 . 11/11/2019 Oh I couldn’t resist when you mentioned in the other site that you had more chapters here. This is awesome! Loved everything after the reveal. I’m glad the two can be happy, and keep being who they are. |
| brandonbuckets28 chapter 4 . 8/10/2019 this was really well written and fun to read |
| CaptainMalcolmReynolds chapter 2 . 3/22/2019 OK... so I've just discovered your writing... and now I'm addicted. AND you had me at go-se. This chapter is Shiny! |
| CaptainMalcolmReynolds chapter 4 . 3/20/2019 Yeah... just found this, and I'm dying laughing... it's awesome! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/18/2019 Lol! I would love to read more of this! Chat is so cute! They both are! Lol |
| Boogum chapter 4 . 1/30/2019 The puns! (Yet here I am grinning) This was great! |
| Boogum chapter 3 . 1/29/2019 I read this on my commute. Awkward. But good chapter lol. |
| Boogum chapter 2 . 1/29/2019 lol this was great! |
| Boogum chapter 1 . 1/29/2019 Ohh, this is interesting! |
| mrsbabby0611 chapter 1 . 12/19/2018 OMG! I absolutely love this story! It gives so many emotions and I love it! Plus the added smut mixed in is just purrfect! I about woke up my baby laughing at Plagg’s comment about her yo-yo! I can’t wait to read more! |
| RoseySparrow chapter 4 . 11/27/2018 Omg this fic is amazing. I’m blushing and laughing and cannot wait for the next (last?) chapter. |
| Norikins chapter 4 . 10/23/2018 I love your puns. Im enthralled and giggling all at the same time. |
