good chapter, keep up the good work

Pops: I’m talkin about u Erxen, shut ur *ss up! Also came to fix my typo *Akira

Pps: idk why b*tches be hatin on this and actin like critics when their legit readin a fandom *cough*wannabe*cough* anyways as a person who’s seen their fair share of fandoms, specifically the reincarnation ones and not to mention, Naruto Fandoms! I can honestly say that this is one of the best I’ve read. The characters personality is on point, I don’t understand the hate on normal relatable f*ckin feelings like Brahh not every OC gonna be a f*ckin Mary Sue, people have their ups and downs and I can say with surety that I prefer the raw emotions more then the typical “Ohh life changin occurrence but I’ll get over it in 10sec tops” like no! Ppl hurt and ppl can be stupid and make bad decisions and sometimes, I won’t lie, it’s frustrating but that is, at least in my opinion, make a darn good story! This is really good and I love it, I love ur OC and her complex sh*t show of emotions and problems and I love how she tries her best even if she can’t go about doin things “perfectly” if ppl can’t handle that then they can skedaddle and stop being f*ckin idiots with nothin better to do then wipe their sh*tty opinions on other ppls hard work! So yass I love this and hope to see more of Akari and how she’ll pave the way to a peaceful, lovin’ life!

Omg, I should be sleeping instead of bawling my eyes out at 2 in the morning but the temptation was too strongggg! :,( Swear mf’s ain’t sh*t, like honestly, I flew off the handle, over here cussing out all them little kids out while tears and snot slid down my face like a madwoman :,D I went a little dark too ngl, saying if a kid or two went missin I’ll be fine with that xD but on me I felt stab of this tragically angst chapter in my frickin soul! And Jesus, did the Itachi part, more then anything else, had my heart bleeding out with all them painful stabs to the feels, god that was just heartbreaking /3 Also, legit felt that when she talked about it hittin her harder then anyone else cuz it’s so f*ckin true and unfair how everyone is using her as a scapegoat and expect her to just take it! Like, b*tch tf! She the one who has to live with that fact that she literally has her parents murder inside her and she has no scapegoat or outlet and that fact just made it more of a painfully bitter pill to swallow! Swear humans ain’t worth sh*t I give my permission to curse that village to hell and back and skedaddle! Let them save their own *sses when fate of the world starts goin to sh*t! Anywaysssss, movin on from the ramblin fest but swear I couldn’t wait until morning, I was waiting for this update and how it left off last chapter, ngl, had me a little skeptical with how the next chapter will be but I was wrong to doubt cuz this was amazing! I’m so glad u finally updated and I can’t wait for ur next update! Stay safe, stay strong and stay healthy!

Ps: Legit about to wring Kakashis neck for not backin up my gurl!

This chapter did a exceptional job with detailing the transition between Akira’s life with her parents and after the attack. Maybe you disliked it because it covers a large amount of time quickly, but I think it’s equally easy to get bogged down in the specifics if your not careful. I really like the inclusion of the physical changes done to Akita from containing the Kyuubi, it makes sense that something that powerful would have an influence. I hope some of that made sense I’ve been writing research papers for days so my brain is fried to shit. I look forward to more!

this feels more realistic then a lot of reincarnation stories.

that little extra is so cute

oh my go

DANG that sucked so much it made me tear up! Poor Akira! What hurts the most is that they won't even let her see the onky family she has left...I mean after the explanation I sort of get Naruto, but why Kushina? She's already unconscious, like what else is she gonna do to her? Nothing people! Man this was a real tough chapter, especially that bit with Itachi, I can't help but resent him quite a bit, though I guess he tries...
UGH but she won't be able to properly watch over/take care of and raise lil' baby Naruto and man does that hurt.
That old ramen man also changed I guess cuz in the original his daughter had still been alive at least.
Man I hope things get better.
Thanks for the chapter and please stay safe! :)

It’s somehow read the first 8 chapters, some time ago, without being bored by this story. After seeing chapter 9 was available, I decided to re read everything. I could remember very little from this after all.

This fiction suffers from the same problem so many others, especially self inserts, do : a lot of it is asinine.

I’m three chapters in, and nothing has happened. The MC is insufferable, as expected from a toddler who thinks she’s an adult. The writing style is... mundane. Not bad, but nothing to marvel at either. Sadly, the absolute lack of subtlety, and occasional stereotypes only deter me further from reading anymore of this.

Overall, it’s neither terrible not horrible, but still feels a bit like a waste of time.

damn... she probably gonna graduate early but like realistically I don't think she's gonna go out of the village in the near future especially with abduction coming her way ahah
stupid village smh
couldn't she just go missing... but like during her abduction she like get bring outside the village but once outside one way or another she get rid of the kidnappers and just doesn't come back!

You know, I always wondered why they didn’t just pick a fifth Hokage after Minato died in canon. I mean, Hiruzen is old, and I’m sure Minato and Orochimaru weren’t the only two people in a village full of geniuses and powerhouses to have been the only candidates *shrugs* ANYWAY, this chapter is HEARTBREAKING! How could you?! Imagine being Akira and experiencing the full hate of the villagers towards her, and then imagine little canon Naruto experiencing the same thing but having no idea why he was hated so much! I’m legit crying this is so sad :( That Itachi part literally ripped my heart in half, because it seems like he was the only one left who still loves and supports her (where the f-ck are you Kakashi?) and even that isn’t enough because they don’t see each other as much anymore. I think I would go crazy if I were in Akita’s situation. ALSO, I’m so scared now! I swear, I know you said that there are going to be dark themes, and that last sentence about abduction is making me so anxious! I have a feeling it’s going to be Root and they’re going to try to weaponise Akira, and I just can’t! I am so so so scared for her, and I just want to protect her because she doesn’t deserve all the shit she’s been getting (and will probably get). PLEASE don’t traumatise her and us readers too much, I don’t think my heart and my tear ducts can take it *cries* Love this chapter, by the way!

damn! bomb ass chapter! heart breaking and so real. loved it!

At least Naruto is safe...for now. I hope the experience of her last life might make her tougher to deal with all this bullshit.

Though I hope she doesn't take the villagers shit and fights back (either physically or politically) if they go to far.

All in all good luck to Akira and good wishes

Hmm, wouldn't Hiruzen have bent the law to let her stay in her home? Even if he isn't close to Akira.

But yeah, glad this has been updated 3