:)

amazing ending and an amazing story :)

aw

:(

this was a really sad, really powerful chapter.

i dont usually review first chapters- i save it til the end and review the whole fic- but this just hit something in my reader mind.

well done with this,

x

Hey I've read almost all your fanfics in one day **smiles** You're a really great writer! I'm glad I stumbled onto you. I'm sorry I don't have time to comment on more, or finish this last fic, but I'll be back for more another time ;)

Keep writing!

~Ixim

this was good but kai said that hikaru betrayed him. how?

This fic is awesome! Took me quite a while to read since i have to go to sleep but yeah its awesome!

This starting is awesome! I shall read all of the chapters!

Yippee...another fic with Rei and Kai together in the end! I saw this fic yesterday but didn't have the time to read it, so I came back and read it today (after FINALLY let me on! :P) So sad that this is only a stand alone...you really DID leave it at a good place where you COULD do a sequel if you wanted to. Good job on this fic though...I think I might go and check out your other stuff...-~

i can't believe u write such gud fics! its just not fair! lol, ah well, i envy u, ur so gud. and i just listened to "numb" by Linkin park and i was thinking about doin a fic between him and his grandfather. NO! NOT THEM TOGETHER! EW! u noe, like the bridge wen it goes...

"And i know

I may end up failing too

But i know

You were just like me with someone disappointed in you"

and the chorus

"I've become so numb I can't feel you there

I've become so tired so much more aware

I'm becoming this all i want to do

Is be more like me and be less like you"

u noe, he rebels and stuff... i guess... i dunno, i can't write angsty stuff 4 my life but i figured u were the perfect one 2 do it! plz if u do write a fic like dedicate it to me? u don't hafta do it now, u can do it after u finish ur other fics, but i really would like to see my idea written out... hm, i fya do, i swear to review every single chappie! well i'll leave now, e-mail me if ur gonna write da fic. e-mail :p weird i noe.

-Tenma Koneko

this is wicked I love stories like this!

I know tis has been finished long ago, but I only read it now and I just had to review it, even though it's 1am!

I think it was great! I loved this story! Of course, it was light and all, but what I loved the most was the fact that the yaoi relationship wasn't too mushy or sugary, it was... just right!

Really, a great end, and I loved it when Kai tried to kill himself in front of everyone to protect his friends... now THAT'S heroism!

Very cute!

Kai, I love you too! Can't Rei and I share? :p

Hey, u better watch wat ur writing. God doesn't have any unwanted children, the children wander away from him...I believe that fully, and don't start flaming me..

*jaws drop* YOU'RE NOT GONNA MAKE A SEQUEL? NO!

Tyson: What's wrong wit her?

Ray: Mizu is not makin' a sequel to the story she just read about Kai.

*sobs* NO! Why? Why?

Kai: It was such a gud story too. *shakes his head in shame*

Max: It has so less parts of me! I was like unconuiess almost the end half!

Tyson: Oh well. Neither did I!

Kenny: I have no parts!

Shut up! *sniffles* Mizu! Come on! Write a sequel! Pwease. *does puppy dog eyes*

K,R,M,T,K: Yeah. Pwease. *does the puppy dog eyes*

what is it with you ppl and shonen-ai? I mean your story was good until that one part. I don't see Kai or Rei as gay! Why would they be?

Beautiful, so damn amazing. This is the greatest angst I've read in the BB section. I'm glad Kai didn't die too.

WAAYY! Great ending!

(huggles the boys)

So sweet!

T_T

But I'm sad it ended.

_

Oh well, all good things come to an end!

great story!