That is the saddest story and it breaks my heart

This is the most saddest fanfic i've read... I literally cried while reading this.. Great job on making this! :'D

FUCKIN' SAD

That's fuckin' sad, man

Hey guys can you all please follow my story on Wattpad it's also a nsl but with a twist well multiple twists it's called How luck destroyed a family thanks

It is a good story... But you could have giving Lincoln the power of mind erase so that His family would never Remember him until he became a famous movie actor/Wrestler/ Musician/ Charity as soon as he reaches this level of success, he releases the mind Erase from his family and as they see him on TV he tells his story of his success. How his family never noticed how he felt whenever they dragged him into family events and even going to a low as to evict him from Family Activities, His family's home, and going to the point of selling his property and possession's... All because of their ridiculous superstition of Bad Luck. So he had erased himself completely from their family and made a name for himself from the ground up without his sisters and his ex-parents. Then he turns towards the camera and said where he lives now with Ronnie Anne and that if his family tries to find and locate him he and Ronnie Anne have built a divice that blocks anyone they don't like or love anymore devices from tracking them down. Try making a story where after Lincoln Runs away from his family because of Bad Luck add this to his future and destiny.

Why would Lincoln still have a chipped tooth as an adult?

Frog Ninja: Seriously. What gave you the impression that it was a good idea to ruin my fic with this poorly written alternate ending?

It's rushed, it goes against the whole point of my story, contains glaring plotholes (the biggest ones being that Lincoln is somehow stupid enough to blow his cover after having been so careful all these years, and how the sisters instantly welcome him back, no questions asked), and everything screams lousy writing (script style, the parents and over half the sisters unceremoniously killed off, etc).

You're just like that loser The Agent Bunny with his fic "Syngenesophobia Alternate Endings", which is just a bunch of badly written cop-outs for a good fanfic.

(35 years after Lincoln's disappearance; set of Holey Moley)

Commentator #1: Luke Carver will face off against Joe Orsini at Sudden Depth; on this hole, the two will stand opposite to each other.

Commentator #2: Whoever puts their ball in the hole in the least amount of strokes will move on to the final hole, where they will have a shot at the plaid jacket, 25 grand, and the Golden Putter.

(Rain starts to fall; the brown hair on Luke's head turns white)

Commentator #1: Wait a minute!

Commentator #2: That's not Luke Carver!

(Sudden Depth hole)

Me: Hair dye! YOU'RE NOT LUKE CARVER!

Lincoln: I can explain!

Me: COURSE MARSHAL! I DEMAND A DISQUALIFICATION!

Lincoln: Okay, you got me! I'm not Luke Carver! I'm Lincoln Loud!

Me: Let me get my smartphone out.

(Gets phone out and scrolls to find a picture of Lincoln)

Me: I knew it! You're the guy who ran away from Royal Woods, Michigan! 35 years ago!

(A fight starts; the Course Marshal tries to break it up, but fails)

Commentator #2: We're going to go to commercial; we'll be right back.

(Royal Woods, Michigan; Royal Woods Police Department)

Chief: It's him!

(3 weeks later; the Loud sisters have reunited with their brother)

Lori: Welcome back to the family, Lincoln; thanks, Joe.

Me: Thanks, Lori; even though we both got disqualified for fighting on Holey Moley, the winner was Duncan Colesworth.

Lincoln: Did he accept the money when he won.

Me: He decided to accept only the jacket and putter; he gave the money to you.

Lincoln: Thanks, Joe!

Me: You're welcome, Lincoln. I'll give you, your siblings, AND your friends a ride back to Royal Woods.

Lincoln: What happened to Mom and Dad?

Lisa: They passed away two years ago.

Lincoln: HOW?

Me: Terminal stomach cancer.

(Royal Woods, Michigan)

Me: I had some contractors rebuild your house; it's now a futuristic one.

WHAT THE LOUDS ARE DOING NOW THAT THEY'VE REUNITED:

Lincoln: Still plays miniature golf, even though he was banned from participating from Holey Moley; the show itself was cancelled because of the fight between him and Joe. He is now married to Ronnie Anne; they have six kids. Lincoln keeps his hair white, as he no longer has to use hair dye to hide it (be threw it all out).

Luan: Got back into the comedy business after Lincoln was found; she is now a regular on Saturday Night Live.

Leni: Became a fashion model after she graduated from college.

Lynn: Got back into sports after Lincoln was found; she now plays soccer for the Portland Thorns of the NWSL.

Lisa: Graduated from Ohio State after Lincoln was found.

Luna: Got back into the music business after Lincoln was found; she now does concerts, forming a rock group called Loud Rock.

Lori: Became the new host of The Price Is Right after Drew Carey retired; the show itself added a monthly event called the Showcase Beatdown, where the top five contestants battled it out to see who can be the first to accumulate the points by winning Showcases (closest to the actual retail price without going over: worth 1 point; within $500 of the actual retail price without going over: worth 2 points; WSD: lose 1 point and earn a strike [collect 3 strikes: eliminated from the Beatdown])

All other Loud sisters: killed in a plane crash on their way to Orlando.

That is...actually a really good NSL fanfic, with a Bittersweet Ending. Lincoln never forgives his family for what they did, but he managed to move on with his life.

Do a new 1 please.

The Loud Family deserve to be miserable for what they did to Lincoln. Just like That Engineer deserves to have his genitals chopped off and fed to dogs.

This story made me cry. You are an excellent writer and I hope you will excell in this way of writing; the form was near - if not more - perfection. I suppose I can relate to this narrative from personal experiences I wish not to speak of. Rambling on about my pain is meaningless, but you have captured beauty with this story; and I loved every word. Thank you.

First time reading it using the app. This is really really emotional. This is just as emotional as the two songs I wrote about a broken heart/ relationship that I was in. She left me, let’s just keep it that. I was very nice to her. Bought her treats from school, necklace and took her to junior prom. After that, I just don’t know anymore. The two songs are called Loneliness and Where In The World Is My Love. They’re both played on piano and a slow tempo/emotional songs. This story just reminded me of her.

Sometimes things like this happen.