Please update

oh she better knock some sense into catelyn on how she treats jon.. he is still family whether he is ned's or lyana's.. n lets hope the king does not try to get her in his bed.. grr..

Very good :)

This has a really great start. You’ve given us some background as well as set us up to see how the royal family reacts to her, I just wonder if the starks know of her magic.
You have a steady word flow and your not missing anything major like I, am, is, you, are. You know common mistakes for non English native writers. So great job!
I’m really looking forward to the next chapter.

She could use her magic to 'slowly' heal Bran. Instead of where normal cross overs have the intsa heal. 1st snap his legs back in place, then secretly heal his spinal cord, then a few days later start slowly feeding straight up healing magic directly into his body.. but keeping him in a healing comma for at least a month.

continue and update she with legitimecy find conspiracy counter starks and from her magic pocket get veritaserum or sneak magic pact to save starks or just implant new ideas implant idea destroy another family for her crimesand in to her brothet jaime to sneak her veritaserum and before all houses ask under veritaserum to she tell she kill her husbarn .probal she find aray stark has magic later a about arya animagus form is westron to better and unite them in peace make progres when people get more hygienic(that remove smell from cities and villages).probaly arya have dreams about night king that make they start preparation on long night and undead arya avake srone knights army like in movie battle for hogrard enchanted to able kill undead and shield turn many undead into dust before night king destroy shield with magic lights to army of liling see .imagine arya activate her stone army and before suprised faces others shout some monologue like mcgonagal in movie harry potter siege of more.

Hope to read more soon.

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Thus is so captivating, I wish there was more.

Please, please update. So far your story is starting off really interesting so I want to see what will happen next! Will there be any pairings for Lyanna? I would totally see a Jon/Lyanna pairing.

Please update, it starts great and please do Lyanna x Jon

please update, it starts interesting and please do Lyanna x Jon

please update, it starts really interesting

I can't wait to read more! I wonder if she can do something for Bran? I'm definitely looking forward on how a mere female commoner (they think) will affect the changes in Westeros.

I really like it so far! Can’t wait to read more!

Like it so far, hope you continue it.