Exactly what I was looking for

The imagery of Rose teaching clumsy ole bella to dance is the best kind of imagery, thank you so much

IM FEELING SHIT YOU GOT ME FEELING

Please post part 2.

Sweet story. I love your writing style. Can't wait for the next update.

Loved it!

This is the best story I’ve read in a really long time, even if I prefer Bella/Rosalie relationship but you made me appreciate Alice and Bella together and I loved Bella and Rosalie friendship, I can’t wait to read the rest of this you, you’re great

This is the best story I’ve read in a really long time, even if I prefer Bella/Rosalie relationship but you made me appreciate Alice and Bella together and I loved Bella and Rosalie friendship, I can’t wait to read the rest of this you, you’re great (sorry for any mistake but English is not my first language)

Yo, didnt want you to feel bad or anything. It wasnt meant to be criticism or a shot or anything it was just food for thought. It just felt wishy washy. I dont want to fight and you dont owe anyone anything its a fan site. I guess I didnt get across that it was just a comment not meant to be offensive. I'm a terrible writer. You're great. Sorry

Good stuff, good words. I like it. However, I'm not so good with the word things but just know that I smiled like a loon and fell a little more in love with your writing. Can't wait to read more of your stuff.

Maybe people keep asking for updates because on tumblr you have given at least two distinct dates in which you said you would post an update and it didnt happen. There was also no acknowledgement to missing the date afterwards. It feels like baiting. Maybe you should take a page from paige turners book and just not speak of the stories until you actually have an update

I love it.

Like, Bella is the Cullen's family. She gets on with everyone. So Alice feeling like she's no different to the rest of them, it's haunting and angsty and ugh. And then there's Bella coming along to try and show her without words how she feels. Come on, the freaking ties! Standing there all cute as fuck, options available, my heart. For some reason, her wearing glasses just makes it even more adorable.

AND SURPRISING ALICE. PRACTISING IT EVEN. OH MY LORD.

Bella is too fucking smooth and clumsy at the same time. How.

BUT GOD. Bella learning how to dance with Rosalie determined to cheer Alice up and Alice instantly comparing herself to Rosalie. My heart hurts.

And you know what happened? I had to stop reading the chapter and answer the door and I kept thinking about the second part, Overnight. But when I went to reread it (because I just had to) there was MOREEEEE to the chapter. Elation doesn't begin to describe how I felt when I continued reading.

'TOO LATE'

You're a genius.

Bless you.

This was awesome and hilarious and I wanted to smack them both upside the head, which just goes to show you wrote this perfectly...

:)

Somehow dislocated my pinky reading this? And it was near the end so I couldn’t help but feel pride? Like of all times to dislocate it, it’s almost in sink with Bella’s wrist, and I know it’s stupid but, I had some sort of acceptance because of it. It’s fixed now, hurt like no tomorrow. But ayy.

This is so amazing. The last scene reminded me of fanart of Alice and Bella on Tumblr. It was perfect. This is the perfect writing to go with it. Never stop writing. This really made my day and it's only 1:49am.