This is a great story! I love this song, and it just seems to fit the personality of what a young person put into a situation like that would be thinking. In a rank such as Pharoah, he would be expected to be a god. You portrayed this wonderfully. Excellent job!

But when he gets back to the palace? His father's treasures all over the floor! The guards running frantically! Walls smashed and cracked! And in the middle of it all, a white-haired tomb robber with scars on his face, laughing like a maniac, holding the former king of Egypt's mummy by a rope around the corpse's neck.

Woah...deep...I like it very much...