OH MY GOD! I love it, love it, love it! This is the best story I've read in a really long time, ya know. You have a style very similar to my own, actually. I found absolutely nothing wrong with the story aside from a few spelling errors, which were probably just typos and didn't take from the story. This was incredible! I love the epilogue. It was lemon, but in a loving way, not like most of the smut here. In short: EPIC!

-Kon

I'm really looking forward to the sequel! I surely hope that it's not a daughter... most writers use daughters instead of sons! Hey, I'm a girl but I want a son, not a daughter! Anyways, this story is really great! I really and very much like it! Keep the good work up!

THis is a great chap! Three cheers for you! Whope!

What a good start! Melfina and Gene forever!

This is very wonderful story and it was great to see just how both Harry and Khan played a part in Melfina's illness. Let's hope that in the sequel, you introduce Mel and Gene's son/daughter.

this was a good story but there are many selling errors. however i think it would be good if you write a follow up with the starwind family

Just be careful noone catches the lemon and reports you. Someone did that to my fic and I had to repost the whole thing minus the Gene&Mel lemon.

Anyway, I found this to be lemony fresh. Although, I really don't think that it was necessary. I'm not saying it was a bad idea to put it in, but it wouldn't have been a bad idea if you hadn't put it in either. I think that the end of chapter 3 was proof enough of Gene and Mel's love. Well, in any case, keep on writing.

You've done an excellent job writing this story. I thank you for writing an epilogue. It had some very sweet moments. I hope you write a sequel. Maybe you could write a whole story about the nine months of pregnancy that Melfina has to go through. It'd be very entertaining. XD I'd actually pay to read something like that. XD

You are awesome for doing this last chapter. I am glad you had a friend who encouraged you to do this. The cutest thing is when Melfina pinched Gene's cheek and they both laughed. I'm a female who tends to gravitate to find things like that cute. It is a sweet ending to the story and I hope you write more stories about any of these characters. Thanks.

Good job tastefulfully done...one question: Who's...liquids...was Aisha smelling that was more addictive to her than catnip? o.O heh, just curious;;

And yesh, another story would be cool *nod*

Very good and interesting story Rosefire, Glad Melfina kicked Harry's ass, good one, anyway great story, please write more like these!

Not bad. You've got a knack for disturbing mental imagery, I'll give you that (the bleeding Melfina and all). The romance does seem to take more of a backseat to the angst in this fic, so I'd change the genre. You've also managed to create a good OC, which can be something of a rarity in anime fanfics. Keep writing!

This was great! Too bad we can't get this animated and into the OLS storyline (*sob*)

I hope you right more multi-parters! And I hope it's real soon!

Let me start off by saying that this is one of the better outlaw star fics I've ver read. The first chapter got me interested, the second chapter was a cliffhanger that got me hooked, and the ending was very satisfying. Just two comments though. (1) I really don't think that Gwen Khan, taking into account his shifty and manipulative persona, would be willing to help Gene save Melfina under any circumstances; especially considering that he already got what he wanted from the Galactic Leyline. (2) I think that the title doesn't exactly fit with the plot of your fic. Maybe you could consider changing it to something that reflects the bond of love that exists between Gene and Melfina and how that's what enabled them to defeat Harry. Maybe something like, "Never Alone" or something to that nature. Just a suggestion.

And now I'd like to extend an invitation. I've been posting my own epic "Outlaw Star" fic here at entitled, "Outlaw Star; The Ryunoken Sword." It's a continuation fic with new enemies, new allies, and a whole new adventure. If you're interested, check it out and give me a review.

Finally, it's up! I'm so glad you continued with this story, because it turned out great! (And thanks for mentioning me at the end, also. I feel so special _)