I just cannot continue with this story. I have no problems with "weird" or "creepy" story's but the whole time line and even writing seems all over the place, I'm sure that it could be an intriguing story given that a lot of the reviewers I see are completely "mind blown" but it's just not coordinated well enough (in my opinion) I hope everyone has a good day though

This story was fantastic. Thank you very much for writing this. :D

Okay that ending was fucked up. I did not like it. Rape scenes are awful. Though the story was twisted from the get go but I was morbidly intrigued. I dunno what to think of this fic but I can definately say I've never read anything else quite like it

Altogether original and entirely unnerving; genjutsu is taken to its limit and despite its lack of straightforwardness as a subject matter it is explored in a thought provoking manner.

To have power over others' perception is to define their existence and their reality, making Sakura effectively a god. Even more terrifying is the implication that the entire world is either Sakura's imagined construct, or she can simultaneously ensnare the entire world's minds to achieve seemingly instant teleportation or change the sky's colours, raising the question as to whether anyone existed in objective reality or were created as part of the genjutsu. Poor Itachi at least is shown to wonder.

On Sakura, her freely expressive doubt of a reality persisting separate of her perception has consequences that withstand scrutiny in terms of her consequently lacking any morality, having no patience to reason or negotiate and her general apathy and nonchalance. Her goal of seeking knowledge to add to her sense of self (which is the the only thing she can confirm to exist) was also a well thought out and logical characterisation.

Indeed, the spectrum of responses to Sakura's actions all read well: Koharu's assassination attempt, Itachi's surrender after realising the overwhelming futility of resistance and the prideful disbelief of the various clans.

On general structure, the use of a series of short interludes is a little disorienting and reads disjointedly which, while annoying in almost any other story, suits this one quite perfectly. Similarly, the emoticons uniquely complement Sakura by lending her a sort of cutesy surreality.

My only qualm would be with the ending which was a rather sudden and jarring jump between worlds. 'Akane', however, seemed well practised in adjusting to an entirely new world which suggests prior experience. This world-hopping could have been foreshadowed earlier in the story unless the intent was to startle the reader which I think would be more fitting if Sakura was similarly surprised.

In all, it is a great little piece deserving the time to review and I would quite like to read the introduction to life under the new world order even should it never see any further installments.

Yeah, that was insane. Wow... what the hell... is that even possible? Wait, if this your story, you're technically God itself in that story and anything is possible should you wish for it... what is reality? Is this a dream? Maybe we're all not real... oh my god you broke me. I'M HAVING A IDENTITY CRISIST HERE OH MY GOD MAYBE WE'RE IN TSUKUYOMI NOW MAYBE WE'RE ACTUALLY NINJA FROM NARUTO OH GOD MAYBE IM LIVING A DREAM I MADE UP OH GOD MAYBE THE UNIVERSE IS A LIE OH GOD WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK

This story has been very entertaining and acts like a brain teaser in some capacity.

Interesting summary, but I think you need to take a copy of this to a psychiatrist, declare it your work and ask for help

that was... weird as hell and not something I expected. congrats, I guess?

The twist and turns this story takes is many and various.

Pein will learn to be wary of what promises he makes, since he will be expected to fulfill them.

And the ripples continues to spread.

That is one extreme reaction. To kill of every single one with that name. It would be interesting to see what the Bloody Mist would think if it ever comes out that Konoha has gone to such extremes.

Wow. To constantly live wondering if anything is real, or if it is all a lie? No wonder they have so much problem with the mental health in Konoha.

Wow. That is some powerful bloodline, to turn even a Yamanaka inside out like that and make them doubt everything.

Yes, I am looking forward to reading your next stories.