| Reviews for A Jedi in Dumbledore's Court - Episode II |
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Guest chapter 24 . 7/20 Lockhart ran after Draco, who dashed down the main staircase. He ran into the second floor corridor. Suddenly, the young boy skidded to a halt. Reaching out, Lockhart grabbed him by his shoulder, then saw what had st Draco in his tracks. In the paragraph above, stopped is written as "at" |
lightningstar375 chapter 27 . 7/21 Quick question, does harry still have parseltounge? |
Guest chapter 9 . 7/19 "I hope you get better soon," Draco said. "I have to go to detention, where I'll no doubt write be writing until my hand completely falls off." The "write" in the above paragraph is superfluous. |
Omniva Verse 42 chapter 4 . 7/20 Lockheart is COMPETENT! I have NEVER read a story where Lockheart is a good teacher! That's a really interesting take. I wonder if he still committed fraud and brainwashed people? |
misteryman526 chapter 26 . 7/20 I still find a competent, helpful Lockhart mind boggling, but he had a good death. |
buterflypuss chapter 27 . 7/18 good chap |
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 27 . 7/18 Good chapter and great speech by Albus. Thanks for sharing! |
Kairan1979 chapter 27 . 7/18 Much better than 'second chances for everybody' Dumbledore from fanon. |
Jostanos chapter 27 . 7/18 Which line? *ahem* This chapter, like the others, has been a joy to read, my friend. Thank you. |
trekkifulron chapter 27 . 7/18 If you start taking bets put 5G on Lucy not going to azkaban. He knows too much with too many enemies. It's the veil for him. |
Guest chapter 27 . 7/17 I loved how you changed the image of the headmaster being always forgiving to being one who knows that someone shouldn't be given another chance |
BrightSkywalker chapter 27 . 7/17 Perfect |
Greer123 chapter 27 . 7/17 Down goes the head of House Malfoy. |
acquiringwriter chapter 27 . 7/17 Yeah fuck em up Dumbles |
narutouzumaki9718 chapter 27 . 7/17 LOL I saw that and thought that would be amazing if he cursed. |