it's Really CUTE I like it

uwu This was so cute to read! Yeah, I don’t know what it is, but there’s something about Gilbert just doing normal, non-awesome things that’s really sweet. I also just love how the beothers interract. It used to be Gil watching over Lud, and now it’s the opposite. They really care about each other. And Lud is totally okay with the idea of Gilbo making friends with the elderly. XD
Don’t worry about your English at all. I’ve read this story and “Shattered Dreams,” and neither had any major mistakes. I didn’t even know the word “somnolence” until reading this one! You put lots of cute details in, and I can follow the thoughts and feelings of the characters very well. Thanks for writing!

ohhh I loved it

hey so I'm only about halfway through, but I just wanted to say that a)it's awesome so far but b) you wouldn't say guten abend, herr. like you would say good afternoon, sir. it's either Herr followed by a name or rarely guten abend, der Herr.

LOVE IT!