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   APuzzleOfPlacesAndTimes chapter 1 . 7/29/2019 You need to continue this! I have read a fanfic about Obi-wan knowing about the future (The fall of the Jedi order, ect.) but the what if that happend to Qui-Gon has never crossed my mind before and I am VERY intrigued. Again, please continue this! (Btw, if Obi-wan's dreams about being a padawan don't get crushed numerous times and he doesn't go outside the temple at that time because Qui-Gon excepted him right away, will Obi-wan be ignorant to the cruelties and harsh realities of the world for a bit longer? And how would that effect him and his training? Just food for thought :) |
| mmmdixie chapter 1 . 1/15/2019 I love it. You should expand |
| serenity.snetsinger chapter 1 . 7/22/2018 Hiya #love your story maybe you could do a follow up story by going through all the steps of becoming a padawan please |
| Sasuke-n-Tomatoes chapter 1 . 5/7/2018 This was a very sweet one-shot story! :) Usually, it is Obi-Wan who goes back in time so the change is nice for once. Thank you for sharing! |
| agnesiona chapter 1 . 4/24/2018 Please more chapters. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/2/2018 Very interesting and Im looking forward to reading more. |
| Kenobi1 chapter 1 . 1/24/2018 Aww, this is so adorable! Beautiful story, thanks for writing! |
| NabooRose chapter 1 . 1/3/2018 "This time, Obi-Wan will be happy..." Awwwww, the angst! *searches for a box of tissues* This was so sweet! Jedi Apprentice Book #1 made right. 3. I loved it! Protective Dad Qui is much preferred to the cold and uncaring master created by Xanatos. Thank you so much for writing! It was really good! :) 3 3 |
| theFGnat chapter 1 . 1/2/2018 Very nice, like the fact that it's Qui Gon who goes back to change his training of his padawan and not Obi Wan going back. Also the fact that Qui Gon was dead and thus pretty much all knowing for over a decade before going back gives him more knowledge and objectivism than Obi Wan who's had a front row seat to the highway to hell and tends to take all the blame... Anyway, I'm foward to your next update! |
| Iforgotmyformerusername chapter 1 . 1/2/2018 Oh wow this was so cute! Most time travel fics are from Obi-Wan's point of view, but it is nice to see one from Qui-Gon's view for once. Is this a one-shot or are there going to be more chapters? Because personally I would loooooooove to see where this could go. Anyhow, thank you so much for writing this, I love it! |
