This is the second time reading this story and I love it! Please continue on!

Interesting chapter. I don't usually enjoy cheating stories, but at the same time I like angst.

Seriously..how can she even think about getting back with him? Hes out fucking submissive before the elevator hit the bottom floor when she left. Hes nothing but a selfish, cheating prick. How could Luke betray her like that, giving him the file. The kid would be better off being raised by someone other than the Grey family for sure. Elliot is pushing subs on him, and his family hates her? And he was too spineless to tell them what he did...The Grey family may have money, but money doesnt make you fit to raise a kid. They are all low life pieces if shit.

I think you or very talented writer and enjoyed reading this story.I just wish it was more thank you

Ana has fire and guts to finally say no more to Carla. Finding themselves together again, be at peace for those who care about them is what they needed. A good HEA story for Christian and Ana, overcoming their turbulent history. Thank you for sharing your story.

I never finish reading the story. Good progress on the young family's life.

Lord have mercy started this yesterday and just had a chance to finish I absolutely loved it you are an amazing writer and author. Looking forward to reading more of your stories
Thank you for sharing your imagination

This story is off or something isn't right. Nothing meshes. It just jumps and jump to odd beginnings that do not match up. WHO IS SKYLAR GREY? at the end of chapter 9? I've read that name in another story where Ana gets kidnapped and assulted. Think it was on Wattpad. Oh well who knows

As a writer you need to have thick skin.
You will have those who accep your writing style, and those who will criticize your stories harshly.
My suggestion is that you grew some BALLS, and realize this is your story. Write it for you. Be realistic, do not go to far in to make believe. Do research on particular illness and diseases.
Lastly, remember E.L. James Fifty Shades of Grey received a lot of praise but double criticism.
She wasn't rude to those who criticize, she wrote the second and third books and became a weathly woman with three movies
Don't bite back at the criticism, keep writing, learn from their complaints, do your research...and most of all, grow as a writer.
Good luck, I enjoyed reading this story and your writing style. You kept the pace of the story fast.

Thank you for the story

Christian so has to get Teddy a dog. LOL

Ana is a really good mother not letting her differences with his family come between letting Teddy know them.

I'm glad that they finally talked everything out and are on better ground.

They definitely said a few nasty words to each other that fateful night. Mia slapping Ana across the face landed her right back in the hospital. That was uncalled for especially in the state that Ana was in. So, he hasn't told his family why Ana really left yet.

I going with that the tumor was malignant after all? Hopefully Grace now knows exactly why Ana left? What did Elena text Ana?