Reviews for Over But Never Out
Pr3v1ous chapter 15 . 6/23
Will there be more? Please? This was sooooi good!
Tremors chapter 4 . 5/7
Percabeth
Anjali chapter 15 . 5/6
Next chapter please
Guest chapter 15 . 1/5
Another fucking pathetic asshole who can’t finish what they start. Worthless sack of shit.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/16/2019
Umm, if he is an Olympian then that makes him a God. I don't think you could drug Zeus with human drugs, so why can you do it too Percy? Like how does that work, he is a god, human stuff can't hurt him. Remember when he was a Demi both normal steel and celestial bronze could hurt him, but as a full fledge god he can't be hurt by normal steel. And I imagine that the drug was given via injection, the needle can't penetrate his skin... So like, I personally would go back and review and change that tiny detail, even if it changes how he was brought in. But I assure you, changing tiny details like that will make the story better.
thunderofdeath97 chapter 7 . 12/9/2019
fuck this shit im out, thor and loki shouldnt be stronger than him, loki maybe but not thor, and during the chitauri invasion percy would be 19
thunderofdeath97 chapter 5 . 12/9/2019
he is a god a fucking drug would not work
thunderofdeath97 chapter 3 . 12/9/2019
jupiter cant do that thats only up to the fates, and hades/pluto to an extent
thunderofdeath97 chapter 2 . 12/9/2019
meh i agree with gaea about jason and piper, i hate them both, well in a sense she does want their blood so i guess that is a form of trying to eat them, and kronos had to get it from somewhere
thunderofdeath97 chapter 1 . 12/9/2019
the avengers better not be op, why did fury sat gods? hes a mortal
Guest chapter 4 . 12/1/2019
basic summary of this story, we hate zues and love sally
i-l0ve-y0u-3000 chapter 2 . 11/27/2019
THE TITLE IM SORR HABABABA
Guest chapter 9 . 11/20/2019
I thought it was explained in one of the books?
Guest chapter 10 . 10/2/2019
I would be a vampire ️
Guest chapter 9 . 10/2/2019
Yes I would get a tattoo and of a black feather with crows coming off of it
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