That teaser tho. I can't wait. I do have hopes in my head for where you go with things, but I feel the direction you're going will be similar. The only thing I'll suggest is maybe work on a way for them all to work together again. You had some good solo stories for the characters on their journey but when they started coming together, or even meeting each other, those drew me in more.

I do like your story though it's kind of annoying and poorly thought out how Ozpin seems to predict everything. Your using him as more of a plot device than an actual character you should throw in him being truly surprised every now and then.

Great story! Keep up the amazing work!

Been following this story for so damn long now and felt in love with it form the very start. And every new chapter made me love it even more. I'm sorry that I'm not commenting as much as I'd like to, but seeing the ending to yet another breath taking part of this story makes me realize that I should definitely do so now and tell you how much I appreciate your beautiful creation and all the hard work you put into this. Thank you so much.
I remember the very loud outcry of so many people about the Yang/ Neo/ Blake thing, and also remember how sad I was seeing so much negativity for something I love, something I felt like is absolutely perfect. I can't even begin to think about how you must have felt about it yourself. I'm just really really glad that you powered through it and continued writing. Personally I'm very much in love with the whole Yang/ Neo/ Blake situation and couldn't ever have wished for more. So thank you again for not giving up and for continuing for everyone else who's still very much enjoying this ride.
I'm really looking forward to what's next to come.
God bless and see ya in the next part.

Well all seems well now, but I bet part 3 is gonna be nothing but a roller coaster of emotions and recovery. And yeah that finale was crazy, but I'm still on Ironwoods side.

OH NO O H NO FUCK NO NO THIS AGAIN

Well...they are in trouble.

I really hope Ruby hasn't stopped her slip into madness. I really want to see the interactions between her and her friends when she and the red death merge.

WHAT NO IM KINDA GLAD BUT NO AT THE SAME TIME GOD

I binge read both parts of this story over the course of this last week and even though I loved it, I feel like I need some stupid happy story now to feel better. I can't wait to see how everything keeps going forward.

Good God, can you write fight scenes. This one had some serious weight behind it, the ethereal (more than) half insane perspective made horribly real without devolving into flat gore. Really. I am very impressed. Great work.

Yet another great chapter to amazing story!

Whyyyy everything is burning AGAIN, Well...at least that bastard is dead

Tucker did it, what is caboose on the Atlas side if so how many friendlies are dead cuz of him

Damn Adam! Just kill him already! He deserve the worst end in the history! I still can't believe he done that to Kali